Naruto: From the Start, I Sign In for the Rinnegan

Did Uchiha Shisui really die in that great battle? How could Kakashi die on his way to find Rin? Is this the butterfly effect? ​​Have you not read the original work? Obito couldn't see the protagonist's Rinnegan; if he couldn't see it, why would he wear sunglasses?

The protagonist is ignoring everything and accumulating strength everywhere. What kind of writing is this? The protagonist has no character development. Why are those easy ninjutsu techniques, which are only used for daily check-ins, not in major wars and conflicts? Are they going to be used on Kurenai? And what about Kurenai's love life? It's hundreds of chapters long, how can she fall in love while watching a movie?

What's with the 8-point rating? It's utter garbage! Characters who deserve to die die, and those who don't deserve to die die too. Then it gets stuck in One Piece. If you're going to write Naruto, just write Naruto. You could at least put the One Piece transmigration in the next book! It's all about torturing this person or that person; it's completely pointless.

It was a huge, unbearable lump.

Not so good

It's not just bad, it's awful.

Nice

The early Naruto series was terrible, but the later episodes, along with One Piece and Bleach, became somewhat watchable.

I can understand if you write about Naruto/One Piece/Detective Conan/Bleach, worlds that don't venture beyond the universe or know about other planets. But you're writing about Saiyans??? The strongest Saiyans fly to other planets in spaceships, and the most powerful ones travel to other universes!!! And there's even time travel/King Kai/Supremacy!

This book is good, but the ending was a bit too rushed. It would have been great if the Dragon Ball saga could have continued.