The Infinite Check-In of the Bright Moon in the Qin Dynasty

It can only be said to be garbage! The author misses women all the time! You have already accepted the harem after reading about ten chapters. It shows how low your works are. When you travel to the Qin Emperor's era, you only care about romance and don't care about the people and their country. Is it true? There are so many beautiful women in Qin Shi Mingyue, are you going to accept them all and show mercy everywhere? It's true that you can have emotional scenes, but I think it's too casual for you to go to the Yan Kingdom and meet the Snow Girl. This is your downfall. The 8.4 Given to your work is too high. Give this book a chance to be revised! You can still watch it with more changes, otherwise it's too bad. It'll make you want to vomit, laugh, curse, and punch people.

I was talking about being free and happy, but in the end, I didn't write any emotional scenes at all. It's been more than 100 chapters. Basically, I just help Han Fei do things and help him solve problems. Are you his father? Or his dog? I'm really speechless. What did you write? Stop writing.

As a modern time traveler, I am afraid that there is something wrong with not knowing the plot at all.

This fanfic is written by me, the author, who has either never watched an anime, or just watched some short videos on the Internet, or randomly looked up information, and wrote it casually. Except for the general plot, which has not changed, other characters have basically been changed by him. He himself did not change it for the plot of this book. It was completely messed up by the author who did not understand him. It is written. Except for the names, none of the characters in it are decent. It is written as a fan fiction. Basically, those who come to read this book have read Qin Shi and can continue to read it. This book is entirely about being at odds with yourself and having trouble with yourself. Unless you have not read Qin Shi Mingyue, you can probably read it. Anyway, it is just random. Scribble

1. Every plot point from beginning to end has to be written in sections, which is not detailed enough and makes it uncomfortable to watch. 2. I have created my own power, but the growth time is too short, and there is not much description and value to show, so I might as well be alone. 3. There are two heroines, Xue'er in the front and Feiyan and her daughter Qiantaki in the back. I forgot about each one and couldn't write emotional scenes. 4. The ending would have been perfect if I wrote a few more chapters, but it was over before I finished it.

There are too many pitfalls and the end is unfinished. (The unlimited check-in system) has only been checked in several times in decades.

A time traveler actually doesn't know who the snow girl is

Speechless to death…

It's boring. This is a cheat. It doesn't require strength or class. What's the point?

As a time traveler who doesn't know the plot, he is also a talent