Pirate's Devouring Fruit

He has obviously developed the ability to devour, and he started in a perfect place like the Baron of the Stomach. I didn't expect him to waste time by going to the navy if he didn't train his ability properly. Later, he just couldn't move around. Maybe he developed the aura of the protagonist, haha.

I don't know how the brain circuit is developed. At first, a halo only accelerates and adds power to help others, so he says that he is smart. Let's understand the Paladin of Diablo 2. The moves developed later have nothing to do with the fruit ability. They are simply forced to be the fruit ability. The weirdest thing is that the fruit ability is gradually enhanced and controlled until it is fully controlled after awakening. The protagonist suddenly thinks of the hunter system and puts a limit on himself. If he violates the agreement, he will let the fruit ability come back to him.

It is unreasonable to support one of the four emperors and participate in the war at the top, causing the navy to be weakened. Later, Zefa and other navies also joined in.

The author writes too many explanations, what's the point? It's so boring to watch

It looks a bit awkward, every line of words is in order, but it reads strangely.

The timeline is weird