Konoha: Starting with Sage Transformation

Overall it's readable. However, it still looks like there are some flaws, such as golden fingers. Without going into details, to what extent can you change your life in order to be strengthened? Does killing count? Are there only those people who have been changed? Does it have any impact on strength? No explanation. Another point is that the emotions are too rich. The protagonist is often moved to tears, or kneels down to be punished. Time traveler, are you really writing this as a child? Now that there is character creation, Uchiha Chizuru's character looks really weird. But Uchiha Homura, Chizuru's grandfather, was more successful in shaping him. There is the patriarch's overall view, and there is also the patriarch's balancing act. [Don't overdo it, after all, there are still many shortcomings]

After seriously reading more than 200 chapters, I probably stopped reading the plot. First of all, there are some problems with the evaluation of combat power, but it can be seen if you are not good at it or are extremely serious about it. Moreover, the fairy setting is very well done and a very novel theme. However, the author can clearly feel the flow rate of the plot for novices. He has been writing the second and third battles for a while and it is endless. He can feel that the plot is stuck and cannot be written out, and it is finished in a hurry. Overall, I would give it 8 points out of 10 for being readable. It has a good understanding of the direction of the war, and the characters are three-dimensional anyway. The first point is that the author was so unfinished that I didn't want to write it anymore. The second point is that the plot came out and I was too busy writing it.

It's anticlimactic, and the protagonist is made more and more stupid, especially since Danzo's death.

Whenever I write about women, I fail.

It's too much to explain a lot of asides.

It's a mess, the levels jump back and forth, and it's not rigorous at all.

Good water

Are you pretending to be a child and really treating yourself like a child? And the licking dog attribute is full, a loyal dog

You can look at the genre and see how awesome the protagonist is and how much his IQ has been improved. However, the result is not as mature as the children in the original work. The strengthening is even worse. It needs to be strengthened to change the fate of others. Do you understand the gold content of the Butterfly Effect? After so many years of killing Danzo, saving hundreds of Senju clan members, and rescuing countless children of the village chief, aren't these considered enhancements? Just as Danzo dies early, the choices of major ninja villages, or the fate of a bunch of people will continue to live because of the death of this important character, or some people will die because of Danzo's death. This butterfly effect is great, and the protagonist's enhancements are hilarious. In addition, the protagonist can practice the immortal mode innately, and there are some plug-ins. It doesn't matter, he can be a clone, a puppet, or make a corpse to possess him, change his eyes, change his body parts, and other fancy things. If you don't have plug-ins, it doesn't matter how fancy you are. You become stronger! Are you alive? No chills. If you add a few points, you will be able to grow infinitely. Why are the plug-ins so bad if you still mess with those things? Can't show the main character's thoughts

Not bad, you can still watch it