Saiyan Younger Brother of Superman

The improvement in combat power is too slow. Over 80 episodes, the human body form has not been developed and it cannot become a Super Saiyan. The improvement in strength is so slow that even a 15-16 year old cannot become a Super Saiyan. Son Gohan can become a Super Saiyan at this age.

It doesn't look good, it's too confusing, there are a lot of characters added, but none of them are well written! Not only DC, Marvel, but also Uncle Long and other European and American movie and TV series characters, you can't be too greedy! The plot has no main line at all. This book feels like a corpse in the morgue connected to an electrocardiogram, a straight and endless line throughout the day! The description of major events is bland, and the words ups and downs have nothing to do with this novel! After reading hundreds of chapters, they were all flat, and then in more than 200 chapters, there was already a wife and a superwoman having a relationship. The setting of Saiyans and the emotional scenes with stallions are also poisonous! There are a lot of things to complain about, but there are too many to list them all, so I'll just delete them from my bookshelf.

Progress is too slow

It has been more than 300 chapters to enter Mimicry, and more than 800 chapters to surpass the game. It is hard to imagine that this is the strongest talent that anyone who has played in the Tournament of Power has ever made a wish with Shenlong. Of course, except that the progress is too slow, it can still be seen.

The character setting does not match the background of the story at all, the plot is draggy and the emotional scenes are inexplicable, and the writing style of the fight scenes is barely interesting. So in conclusion, a novel that is so draggy and uninteresting can disappear from my reading history.

The description of a fight is basically either buzzing or banging. A fight will appear about ten times, so why not write something else? The writing of the fight is really bad.

From the middle to the later stages of this book, I no longer seem to be the protagonist. I often spend many chapters introducing other characters and events. The protagonist rarely appears, and it is already in the middle period. The protagonist does not even have a super.

Come on, the author supports you

It's too messy. The author doesn't have an outline. I just write whatever comes to my mind. It's very uncomfortable to read. I don't know why Jackie Chan's adventurer is also included in it. Also, the protagonist is a bit too weak as a Saiyan and can be injured even if he fights with a bull warrior. I don't know where this score comes from. I'll find someone to brush it up.

The subject matter is good, but it's too messy. Marvel and DC are fine for you, but there is a lot of mess at the end and some are added in. It's really messy.