At the Beginning of the Game, Brother Huang Tiandi, I Gained Full Level Comprehension.

The writing is messy, and the speaker can't write clearly. There are a lot of bad sentences, and the state of mind is also high and low. Not to mention the battle. I was suppressed and deeply powerless one second, and then I fought back the next second. It's really messy and outrageous.

Personally I think it looks pretty good

The character is the good eldest brother of Huangtian Emperor, and he also steals his brother's wife. You can do whatever you want with other women. Huo Ling'er in the original work is originally difficult to reconcile. You write the fanfic just to prevent the difficult to reconcile, and still rob him. Isn't it disgusting? Not to mention the following. Emperor Huangtian becomes a little follower, and the male protagonist keeps showing off, and the fighting power in the back is chaotic. Some of them still copy the original lines and copy and paste them.

Chicken, you are so beautiful

So much nonsense

Bad ending

The writing is messy, I don't recommend reading it.

What the hell is this written? It's so messy. I read it for a long time and really couldn't stand it anymore. It's so messy.

Chaos

There is no new idea at all, just following behind and eating dust.