Dou Po: Starting from Signing in to the Strange Fire

It's too watery. You can obviously use the Cultivation Explosion Card to directly upgrade to the Nine-Star Douzong and crush everything. Why do you have to only upgrade to the Three-Star Douzong to disgust the readers? This is not the first time that you have disgusted the readers. The previous one was barely acceptable. This time it is really too disgusting. Even if it is poorly written, it still has to disgust the readers. It deserves the low rating.

I have read this book before, and every time I see the Yunlan Sect, I really can't stand it. It's too 6-year-old to have a child, and Yun Yun has to be killed. I met Yun Yun when I was 17 and had a baby when she was 19. I really can't stand it when I see it.

You might as well just be a good person, you said it yourself, you are not the kind of person who can't walk around when seeing a woman. You took another snake girl in the desert, and then you had an affair with the fairy doctor, and then you had a child. You are like his horse breed, sowing seeds everywhere. Then he also established his personality and said that he was single-minded. Can you make it cleaner? Why is it so watery?

How to put it, the protagonist is following Xiao Yan's old path. There is no Yaolao, but there is Dan Code; there is no Fenjue, but there are similar techniques. It's very powerful. I feel like if I write it according to Dou Po Cang Qiong and replace Xiao Yan, the protagonist of Dou Po Cang Qiong, with the protagonist of this book, it will be another book. Wise people will tell you.

The author is really too watery, disgusting. As for why it is a bad book, there are the following points. 1. First of all, the writing is really bad. Although you are a web writer, your poor writing skills are considered inferior in the web writing circle. There are even a lot of typos and illogical sentences. I seriously doubt that the author has not graduated from junior high school. 2. The logic is very confusing, and the plot in the previous article conflicts with the plot in the following article. For example, around 130 photos, Xiao Yu revealed his face in front of the weight, but after going to the Yunnan Sect, the weight didn't recognize him again. Also, it was clearly mentioned in the previous article that Xiao Yu made the three-year appointment with Na Lan first, but afterwards it was as if nothing happened. 3. Pure thoroughbred horse writing. This is also the most disgusting point for me. Although there are many difficult feelings in Dou Po, you can't accept them all. When I saw a female partner falling in love with me, not only did Yunyun and I have a baby, but I also had an affair with Yafei on the premise of having Xuner, and within chapter 130, I didn't even know about Qinglin or the Little Medical Fairy. They are all with Xiao Yu, what about Xiao Yan? After reading more than 130 chapters while holding back my nausea, I finally gave up. Friends, hurry up and avoid this!

The protagonist robbed Xiao Yan of all his opportunities. How did Xiao Yan grow up?

Silently, I changed my vest and walked the path Xiao Yan had walked all over again. Then I might as well watch Dou Po Shang Qiong.

I knew that the author would do no good by giving the protagonist the ancient tree of life. He had to kill Yun Yun. It was rubbish and speechless. What did the author think?

This rating is honestly really high. It's too confusing, the writing is very serious, and you have to grind a lot of the time. There are a lot of psychological reactions and psychological reactions, and there are too many conversations between passers-by. In some places, it feels like watching Dou Po again. Maybe it was copied too seriously. In some places, the sentences are illogical, illogical, and outrageous. The Bone Spirit Lenghuo who signed in for the first time was stolen by the system from Yao Lao... Then looking at the chaos in the timeline, the protagonist's combat power was also suppressed. When practicing the skills given by the system, the fighting energy in his body was repeatedly compressed and dropped by three stars. Then not long after, the strength increased and then compressed and dropped repeatedly. The combat power was also outrageous. It is said that if the talent is too good and the skills are too strong, when you break through the Dou Master, you will face heavenly tribulation. After that, every big realm breakthrough will face heavenly tribulation, but such a person who is jealous of the sky When he is around seven-star Dou Shi, he can barely reach the level of two-star Great Dou Master. No matter how jealous he is, Xiao Yan can do it even if he is not jealous. Then when he is still a Dou Master, he has mastered low-level body fighting skills and low-level combat skills. There are high-level Xuan-level combat skills that are comparable to low-level Earth-level ones. The more you write, the more expensive you become. I am too lazy to discuss how you can achieve such high-level combat skills when you are so weak and can still use them for a long time without being able to cross levels... Many of them are quite witty. When she saw Yafei wearing a mask at the age of fourteen, Yafei blushed and her heart beat...

I think it's okay to read it, some people have come to read fanfics, what else do you want? If you don't like reading it, you can go away. You've already read the fanfic. Who cares? Just let it be fun. If you want to read a fanfic and ask for so much, just write one that suits you.