In Douluo Dalu, Reincarnated for a Million Years

What the hell is this writing about? The protagonist's combat power fluctuates. One moment he's fighting Titled Douluo all over the place, and the next moment he's on par with Douluo. There are more soul rings than there are, and even the names of soul beasts can be spelled incorrectly. There are three soul beasts in one chapter, and the protagonist fights them so hard that he doesn't even know who he's beating!!!! Bad review

The front is okay, you have the resources of nine lifetimes and you won't give them to your own woman. Combat power is arbitrary. It will be high and low. Tang Hao even hit him at the door of his house and was still motionless. Even if it is to raise pigs, at least you, as the ancestor, should suppress it. Otherwise, how will other forces view your Spirit Hall? And there is your favorite Gu Yuena, but it turns out that you, the matchmaker, are marrying Ning Rongrong, and the others are slowly waiting to marry later? What do you think of other women? Have you considered their feelings? When I saw the marriage, I just gave up. I don't deserve to be called a scumbag. I'm just worse than an animal. I don't know what the author's mind is.

The front is okay, but the back is unsightly

What the hell, this time the protagonist is the founder of Wuhun Palace, but Wuhun Palace is weaker than in the original work. Even level 91 can be used as a tribute? Moreover, Qian Daoliu found that Tang Hao was actually indifferent.

What's next? Douluo Continent can come out with Dou Di. One day, Tian Yu Douluo, and another time Dou Di's strength.

Author, let me ask you, can reincarnation for millions of years be understood as survival for millions of years? After all, your reincarnation for millions of years also adds up, and your survival for millions of years also adds up. This was not the point of what I wanted to say. What I want to say is, what has a person who has experienced millions of years not done? What woman haven't I seen? Who hasn't had sand? How come you have become such a silly thing? Are you still looking for beauties from all walks of life online? In a million years, what woman hasn't played with it? Still feel fresh? Also, the reincarnation you asked for lasted for millions of years, but in the end, you ended up using other people's belongings? Are they using other people's soul skills? If I don't like the character of Yu Xiaogang, but you are belittling Yu Xiaogang in front of you, but you are using his training methods in the back, and you are "devil training"? Don't you think it's ridiculous? Don't you feel that you are responsible and upright? In addition, other copycats who write fan fiction cannot compare to your shamelessness.

The writing is too messy

The front part is okay, but the back part is as messy as shit. There are many places where I copied the original work. If I don't change it at all, do I think I'm a fool?

Is it right for you, the author, to write a novel without even looking at your article?

The writing is so confusing. The names are Qian Yu, Ye Chen, and Tang San.