Mortal Cultivation Begins with Immortality

I thought it was okay at first. The character setting has already been mentioned. Because of the immortality, the requirements for finding a Taoist companion are high and you don't have to spend all the resources. However, after the good guy found one, he immediately found a worse maid. To put it bluntly, he is a concubine. I can't stand it anymore. The character settings don't match.

Two hundred years old is the peak of foundation building. I'm convinced. The total lifespan of foundation building is only two hundred years. You are stuck in time to break through. It's too slow to have a golden finger. Han Li is already Nascent Soul after two hundred years. You are still building foundation. It's really a waste.

Forty percent of the time, you could watch it if you were bored. Between 40% and 60%, the two of us flipped through the page in seconds, all of which were various dungeons of various secret realms. Each dungeon was filled with souls that controlled all the people and monsters and took away all the resources. I don't know how many resources there are in total. The powerful Tongtian Lingbao Ten Thousand Years Elixir was mentioned several times and could be used to become an immortal. The monsters under his control have tens of millions of immortal cultivators. Every time he controls a group, he will explain in two or three chapters why he does what he does. The benefits of doing this save time and resources compared to cultivating his own power. After explaining two chapters and one sentence, Xu Changsheng instantly controls everyone and steals everything. Then repeat in another place.

The plot details are too long-winded and a waste of time. The reader's time is also precious.

Rubbish, throw away the setting of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality and play your own game, then what else do you write as a fan?

Author, it would be great if you directly wrote about Qi training and Shen transformation, saving you the trouble of practicing it yourself. That's awesome.

It's too outrageous. He has bad cultivation skills and crosses realms casually.

The timeline doesn't even match up. If you don't know how to write, don't write randomly.

Some plots are annoying at first glance. Just because you don't need to use your brain when reading a book doesn't mean you don't have any.

It will be useless after 100 chapters