I, Ran Deng, Also Have Pursuits.

The timeline is messy, the characters appear at random times, the overall worldview is a mid-range prehistoric, and there is not much of a gap between realms. There are four continents at the beginning, Huanglong Cihang and Ran Deng are at the same time, and the First Tribulation of Longhan is just a joke. There are too many things to complain about. 👀ːDingːː, identified as being able to see, but only to the extent that it can be seen

The author does not have the most basic prehistoric worldview. The four major continents were delineated after the gods broke through. It is also impossible to extract the true fire of Samadhi from the Nine Dragons Lihuo to refine the Seven Birds and Five Fire Fans.

The timeline is messed up. The book constructs its own timeline, but also borrows some conflicts that occurred in the original timeline to over-plot. This makes it more confusing and confusing. Some of the modified character settings and order of appearance are also inexplicable, and the basic prehistoric worldview is missing. It's okay not to follow the traditional order of development of the prehistoric world, but it does unfold in the traditional order of prehistoric times. Drawing a tiger will not be the opposite of a dog.

This novel is basically a piece of entertainment written by the author, borrowing the skin of ancient times. The content has basically nothing to do with ancient times. When you read it, don't compare it with the traditional ancient times, otherwise you will feel uncomfortable. There is no right part, it is all written randomly by the author according to his own ideas. Unfortunately, the author's writing style is not good, and he writes like a child playing house! !

Generally, after becoming a god, things begin to collapse, but the author persevered! And 🈶my own thoughts are integrated into more plots, which are innovative! !

The timeline is too messy to read

The timeline is a mess. Zu Fengcai is in the middle stage of Taiyi? Shouldn't the gourd come out after being mentioned for the first time? Shouldn't Jinpeng be an egg at the beginning? The prehistoric period has just begun, and Taoist Huanglong Master Cihang has come out. The timeline is a mess and very long-winded.

It's much better than the time travel stories on Tomato. There are a lot of mistakes but they can be tolerated.

This book is highly polarizing, and readers who are familiar with traditional prehistoric and mythological literature should proceed with caution. The biggest flaw in the book is that the timeline is completely confused, the characters' appearances and the prehistoric stages are completely misaligned, and the basic settings such as the First Tribulation of the Dragon-Han Dynasty, the Four Continents, the Origin of the Dragon, Phoenix, and Kirin Monster Tribes, and the Rules of Life and Death of the Gods are full of loopholes. The plot is repetitive, the chapter on conferring gods is complicated and disconnected, the characters often act out of wit, and the romantic relationship between Ran Deng, Nuwa, and Hou Tu is forcibly added, and the majestic pattern of the ancient world is written in a very narrow manner. The writing is immature and self-entertaining, and there are many poisonous points. To be fair, if you put aside all the orthodox prehistoric knowledge, you can barely watch it as a fan entertainment; if you care about the original setting and story logic, you will continue to have dramas throughout the reading, and the viewing experience is very poor.

What? It's written in a mess.