A Dream of the Red Chamber: Daiyu Returns

This is my first time reading a derivative of a classic. I feel pretty good. Finally, I saw that Daiyu did not have to live and die in such a miserable way, which fulfilled my wish. Such a beautiful person deserves such a perfect and happy ending. Like!

It's quite good to read, better than some books, the writing is good, the content is rich, and the ending is good, but the death of Wang Xifeng is ultimately a pity

The writing style is average, everyone's speaking style is the same, and the personal style is completely lost. Baochai was written as a vicious female supporting character who changes her mind after seeing changes, and Daiyu was written as amnesia. It was suggested that they be used to film TV series in Korea.

The sentences don't make sense and there are many typos

Very ink-stained I could write several chapters about the meeting between King Beijing and Daiyu. I wish I could write out every sentence every moment. Daiyu was poisoned, framed for so many things, and basically had no way to deal with it. It was just for Jia Mu, a bunch of cowards. The timeline and task line are confusing. Xiangyun had a better relationship with Daiyu before Yuchai got married. It is written here that he is very hostile to Lin Daiyu. And Si Qi, who welcomed the spring, died when she was inspecting the Grand View Garden, right? Baochai did many bad things, poisoning Daiyu's mother, the offensive Guanyin, spreading rumors about Daiyu, colluding with the young prince to destroy Daiyu's innocence, and indirectly killing Sister Feng. In the end, he got his wish and was divorced by Jia Yucun's protection? Moreover, people like Li Wan are also cheap, sticking their warm faces to Baochai's cold ass again and again. Xiangyun's final jealousy and hostility are also inexplicable. The Jia family also makes people feel like a family of bottomless blood-sucking worms. It seems that one person has achieved enlightenment and ascended to heaven. Lin Daiyu married the prince. Everyone is begging for a home and taking advantage of the situation. Although I know that the people in the Jia family are rogues in the first place, but writing it like this makes people feel bad. In short, none of the villains in it had an end except for the death of a young prince, and none of the positive people in it didn't take advantage of Lin Daiyu's marriage. . Not to mention the many typos and the unreasonable plot of Lin Daiyu disappearing in danger and then reappearing as a singer with bare feet at a royal banquet. Daiyu loses her memory and the prince leaves Daiyu to live in the palace.

There are some dramas in the middle of the plot, which gradually get further away from the background of the Red Mansion. The writing is okay, let's watch it.

The writing is inexplicable and the characters' personalities are completely different. The plot is too bloody. It's nerve-wracking.

There are some redundant words in the layout that spoil the scenery, but looking at the writing about Prince Beijing and Lin Daiyu in The Dream of Red Mansions, this one has the most reasonable logic, unlike other plots that are completely inconsistent with that era and are too advanced in behavior.

The article is well written, but the chapters are confusing. I write here and jump to there. Has the author noticed it?

This is a relatively well-written article about loving Daiyu, her appearance, talent, and moral character. The two most enjoyable parts of the entire article are when she gets angry at the hypocritical Xue Baochai and slaps her twice, and later on, she slaps Jia Baoyu twice. It's so cool!