
Stay Away from Conan
离柯南远一点
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 6.0M Words
- Genre
- Anime & ACG
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 3d ago
- Source
- Qimao
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2.6kChapters
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911Readers
2.3kMust-read votes
9.0Score
287Ratings
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After reading this book, I will re-review it as a reference for those who have not read this book. Let me talk about the advantages first. 1. The writing is good and the character portrayal is profound. 2. The original plot is quite reasonable, and the details and clues of the case are well described, so that the case is concluded reasonably rather than casually and nonsensically. 3. There are more original Black characters, adding more activity to the organization Next is the shortcomings 1. It's too procrastinating and the pace is too slow, so much so that more than 3.7 Million words are still written about the early events. The key figures on both sides have almost never appeared, and there are very few people who have come into contact with each other. To be honest, the main plot has barely promoted much in 1500 chapters. 2. Regarding the protagonist's golden fingers, to be honest, except for one or two, the others are of little use. The trial of a world can drag on for 7,800 chapters without any progress, and the trial of sub-type cards can also drag on for hundreds of chapters. The justice card has almost never been used since being acquired, and the blessing firearms are not practiced by themselves, so there is no difference between giving them blank cards. 3. The protagonist is too self-righteous, and his character gradually collapses. Don't let go of the opportunity to develop your own power, and insist on fighting alone. As a result, he was in danger too many times in the plot, and Xiao Ai was taken with him. I don't want to recognize my original identity or my family, but I still want to enjoy the convenience brought to me by my family relatives, and I may rely on my family to carry out certain actions in the future. And that's the self-righteousness mentioned at the beginning. I took the gun from Vodka in the early and middle stages of the article. I just don't use it. Is there any gun serial number information on it that can be checked? Not to mention whether a criminal will wear off the gun serial number. It doesn't give you a chance to check. It can't be investigated by the police now, and you have no plan for the next step. Can you practice shooting first? The winery is not a believer. Once there is a confrontation, they will definitely use swords and guns. Why don't you practice shooting to give yourself more confidence? 4. There are problems with the characters of the protagonist group, and the biggest problem is Conan. In the original book, the setting is that of an upright Demon of Light, but in this book, he is portrayed as a lone wolf who only knows how to go in recklessly and does not let anyone interfere. He is unique in that whenever he encounters any dangerous case (not talking about organizational activities, just an assassination), he is not allowed to contact the police or anything else, and he has to do it himself. It's normal for characters to change, but the Conan you changed has turned into a big piece of sand. 5. The character is holy. You may not be able to tell it in the early stage, but in the middle period, the protagonist becomes more and more holy. I don't know if I was too lax about the organization or what, but I didn't prepare anything for Junai's arrival, and didn't consider the possibility of organized action. The three of them faced Junai's offensive in a completely naked posture. It's all based on Xiao Ai's words, and you also wrote that Xiao Ai is not sure how Junai behaves. Then he was almost wiped out by Junai, and then arranged for Koizumi Anko's sudden rescue. Isn't it completely unnecessary? Junai's brainwashing had no effect at all, so it was better to do it directly to avoid future troubles and avoid the possibility of backstabbing when he regained consciousness later. 6. The biggest poisonous point is the flower field, for which I will discuss it in a separate point. It's all about water for the sake of water, and use for the sake of use. A character who should have been discontinued long ago can still stand firm for hundreds of chapters. I don't understand what the author thinks. Huatian tried to kill the protagonist three times, but the protagonist spared Huatian three times. How about just playing around with this? The first time Huatian succeeded in poisoning his predecessor, just pretend that you didn't care about your predecessor's experience and forget about it. The second time he repaid kindness with kindness, he immediately turned against the protagonist after saving Huatian and pushed him off the cliff. It almost ended. He also brought Xiao Ai to the rescue, but was chased by the organization and almost died. In this way, the protagonist later protected her and sent her abroad, letting her go! I was really shocked! Well, you said that Huatian did play a role in the subsequent operation against Kamu, and the effect was achieved, so I think you have come round. In the third time in the United States, I chased you for three streets and emptied the magazine. How could I still feel guilty about Hanada and not kill her, but let her go! The best thing for this character is to take her offline immediately after the incident of sending her abroad. The characteristic of this character so far is that he is crazy, completely uncontrollable, and does things based entirely on his own ideas. Who would put a time bomb next to them like a precious egg? According to the previous precognitive dream, this character can even live ten years later, what can I say? In summary, you can read this book as a relatively pure mystery. People who have not read Conan can also read other plots that are not related to the main plot. The writing is still relatively detailed and pertinent.
Super nice
It started well, but it was slow to pick up, and it got worse and worse as it was written, with unclear characters and an increasingly unlikable protagonist. IQ and memory are both Schrödinger's numbers. Unless every case is triggered, you will never guess where the protagonist's IQ is, how much of the plot he remembers, and how outrageous his character is. The souls of others have penetrated, but at least they know how to repay kindness and how to inherit. The protagonist enjoys all the benefits of the original person, and keeps saying that I am just me. Just enjoy the benefits and not take on the responsibilities. That's how I am in reality, I didn't come here to look in the mirror in a novel
It feels okay from the front, but becomes more and more holy from the back. He often brings trouble to those around him, and the protagonist is simply passive and submissive from beginning to end. The protagonist was almost killed many times, but the villain was either ink or pretending to give the protagonist a chance.
Pretending to be mysterious, knowing the plot and obviously being able to analyze that the Miyano sisters have a close relationship with their original bodies, they are still pretending to be mysterious and not exchanging information properly, which is a waste of time.
It's so frustrating. When you meet someone who wants to kill you, you can only hide or wait for death. You fight back. You obviously have the upper hand. You're too holy.
It's okay to be a background sound, but there are a lot of mistakes and omissions in the details of the case. For example, the protagonist is poisoned and is forced to vomit. The protagonist is poisoned with a fatal poison and has to go to the bathroom to induce vomiting. Does it really have to be so ritualistic? Aren't you afraid that going to the bathroom will make you worse? And even though they are already living together, why don't you tell her that her sister is still alive downstairs? What's the meaning? Don't you think it's weird upstairs and downstairs? There are all kinds of details.
Some plots are indeed good, but the protagonist does very little when he knows the plot. For example, when some events happen, the protagonist does not stop the murderer from killing people. I am not saying that the protagonist should be a saint, but it is no different from whether there is a protagonist or not. And every time Conan discovers something, Xiao Ai wants to I called the protagonist, and the protagonist shut down his phone. This is what I can't stand the most. What is this? Moreover, Xiao Ai followed Conan around again and again when he knew that someone from the organization would be there. They would go wherever there was an organization. It was fucking uncomfortable to watch, but I had seen most of the good ones and could only endure it.
It feels so abstract
I was careless and gave a review when I cut a few hundred pictures. I should have read more, because then I wouldn't have such a high review.