Stay Away from Conan

There are only a few chapters that make me feel really frustrated. The cases I encounter always go wrong at the last step. There is also the issue of fame. Why is the protagonist not famous anymore? I always quietly investigate every case by myself, making it seem like I am the murderer. I can't make good use of all the connections around me. It's written by It's like being an unknown private detective who specializes in investigating cheating. Yes, there are also some rewards that have a cool-down time. If you play the game too much, it's better to be rewarded with basic abilities and then practice upgrading yourself. Is it normal to choose money for the first time to advance because I don't have money? But later on, we have to choose money. Why don't we choose fame? Just look at Mouri Kogoro and you will know. Ever since Conan became famous, there has been no lack of commissions. 🈶Are you afraid that you will not make money from commissions? There is also the issue of organization. Is the protagonist in conflict with the organization? Many cases are related to the organization. Kudo Shinichi has solved so many cases without ever facing the organization. You have encountered it so many times in just a few chapters in the beginning. It's nothing.

This book has been sitting on my bookshelf for a long time. I almost forgot why I stopped reading it in the first place. It wasn't until I started reading it again recently that I lost my motivation after reading Chapter 107. Overall, the logical design is acceptable, but many descriptions are too deliberate. Everyone has a mysterious smile, and as a novel, it seems It's boring. The progress of the story is too slow. Various hodgepodge stories are linked together, but the author doesn't handle it well. It gives people a very strong connection. There is no smooth and amazing feeling like "Oh! So there is this foreshadowing in the previous story!" After reading it. The most important emotional line is deliberately delayed, like The method used by women's videos more than ten years ago was to deliberately create misunderstandings. The male and female Riddlers would not say anything in a single sentence. If the author is skilled enough, it would be fine. However, the emotional writing in this book is poor, and there are too many unnecessary ambiguous interactions between female characters. It can be seen that the author wants to write about Shura Field, but I lacked the ability to write it, so it was almost boring. When I saw 107, the whole thing was boring and uninteresting. After watching it for a long time, I lost my motivation. I hypnotized myself there. At first, I just waited for Conan to become smaller, and then I waited until I finally made sense and confessed to Xiao Ai. I really couldn't wait any longer. I was so bored that I couldn't watch anymore.

I was really moved when I read this book. Finally, the Conan fanfic in my mind appeared. The plot is adapted just like the original work, except that the early word choice is a bit immature and the author did not fully express what he was thinking. This is a book of gold. Although the popularity of fandom is small, and Conan fandom is the hardest hit area, it is really disappointing that this book is not popular. However, considering the current trend of Internet literature and fan fiction, it is not difficult to understand why this book is not popular. The title of the book is also a problem. When I saw the title and the cover picture, my first thought was that the protagonist and Haiyuan Dog Food must keep avoiding Conan in order to avoid trouble. But that's not the case at all in the plot. I haven't read the original works of other characters in the book, so I don't know how the changes have been, but the events in Conan are really amazing. Another big net has been spread out in the big plot. With the fan writing like this, there really isn't much to say. The character design feels a little less three-dimensional. Especially the protagonist, an original character. I feel no joy, anger or joy. In addition, I didn't see any big loopholes, but other comments were very aggressive, so I really didn't notice them. But really speaking, the biggest problem may be the insertion of the plot. There are several chapters that cannot be connected to the previous chapter at the beginning. This method is not suitable for online articles at all. It is really uncomfortable to interrupt the reading fluency, which directly cuts off the sense of substitution. In addition, when there is a chapter review, some results should be done first and explanations should be done later. Don't blame the readers for starting to criticize in advance in the chapter review. However, the flaws do not hide the advantages, crack the wall recommended.

In fact, it can be seen that the author has put great care into this book. Whether it is an original case or an adapted case, it is unique among Conan fans. At the same time, it is actually good at connecting the background of the cases. In terms of character description, except for the occasional vocabulary (such as Gin's sly smile), it is a bit awkward, but it doesn't hurt to skip it. In my opinion, the biggest problem is that the performance is not good enough. It's a matter of character design and substitution of the protagonist: 1. First of all, the author has greatly strengthened Black. The increase in Black's strength has both good and bad effects. The good side is that Black is actually more in line with the evil organization in the original work. An organization that can attract the attention of global agents should be so powerful (it would be too miserable if Gin was not surrounded by undercover agents). In fact, readers do not simply hate Black. Strengthen it and make it reasonable; the bad side is that the overall feeling is too depressing for the reader; whether it is a God's perspective or the protagonist, he is surrounded by organizations from all directions, and there is a bigger conspiracy behind the occasional breakthroughs and resistance. For me alone, it is indescribably uncomfortable to watch; 2. Secondly, there is the problem of the protagonist's personality (for the purpose of reasoning the plot) , mainly because he is too weak, from personality to combat power, skills, etc.; When faced with a behemoth like the organization, he wants to avoid it most of the time, and the occasional confrontation is not decisive enough (such as that Louis); just having strong reasoning ability is actually not enough. As far as I am concerned, it is still very frustrating to be the protagonist (of course the author describes this in order to connect the cases together) and the plot, understandable but uncomfortable to watch); after all, the original plot of Conan strengthens the red side, just to make readers feel comfortable watching it (of course, the original plot weakened the black side so outrageously that the readers later called it mentally retarded), but the protagonist of Aoyama Station can never go wrong. If the technique is awesome enough, then strengthen the black side but I will overwhelm you (such as the full moon and the red and black duel); If the technique is not impressive enough, then weaken Black or strengthen the protagonist (such as the Rum chapter); compared to the original work, the protagonist of this book is so miserable that even a dog can kick him (woo woo woo), and there is no way to see the prisoner being played (it's okay if the md black organization can't beat it, but the mastermind of daily cases can also kick the protagonist, how can it be called miserable) 3. Finally, there is the question of perception question; in fact, what most readers like to hear about is either the persecution of the winery or the persecution of Conan (after all, everyone is a fun person), but red and black can be strong, but the protagonist must have countermeasures. In comparison, the protagonist of this book is not strong enough and suppressed too hard, but it still feels uncomfortable (crying); In short, this book can be considered a qualified book. The Conan mystery fanfic (the emphasis is on reasoning), whether it is the re-description of the case or the combing of the relationship between the characters, is very eye-catching; but it is quite uncomfortable for the reader to step into the perspective of the protagonist (crying); it makes people uncomfortable to read, so don't read it. In fact, I am still curious about how the author adapted the case 😭, which is still very good from the perspective of a mystery novel

Nice! Is a good book! The plot is compact and has no flaws, and there are also small foreshadowings. Although there are small bugs in some places, the flaws are not hidden. It is a very good book! Especially having a female protagonist instead of a male protagonist is great! Recommend!

I haven't read it yet because I saw in the comments section that it's a gay article. Also, I would like to ask, which one is better, harem, single heroine or even no heroine? Is there any other brother who can recommend some harem books on Conan, where the heroine has a concubine Yingli?

One Million Words is one of my best and most anticipated Xiao Ai fanfics at the moment. Personally, the one with soy sauce is sweet but the main story is weak. The coroner also liked it very much but the author was so tortured that the ending couldn't be continued. But in this one, the ups and downs of the emotional line are more exciting and surprising, and the author's own original Tarot is also added. I feel that if it were filled in, it would be a high-quality completed fanfic worth more than 5 million. I hope the author will not forget his original intention 😡 Come on, come on, come on, come on

Do you know what Conan fans are like now? They all have no female protagonists, and all kinds of male protagonists engage in CP with male partners. I'm convinced. Why can I see these in the male rankings? Even if harems are not as popular as before and the two-dimensional world is blooming, there are really so many "male" readers who will knock male CPs. They shout that they can't stand it when they see that kind of plot. Did I say that I knocked on this CP? So what the comment section says, "Don't write so many stories about the heroine Xiao Ai" and "Can there be no heroine?" Are just like I won't specifically click in to make myself unhappy. Since the author has already decided, can those who don't like it just leave silently? 😅

To be honest, most of the books with Xiao Ai as the heroine are old books. A post-00s generation like me has never read a few books with Xiao Ai as the heroine. I couldn't stand the previous writing style. I have been looking for books about Xiao Ai as the heroine and with more advanced writing styles. I have never seen it except Ke Xue Coroner. (It's a pity that the author collapsed in the later period of Coroner, but why are you writing about the police academy group now... Although it is very interesting to fight wits and courage with the organization, why do you feel that you need to engage in male-male cp) I hope the author can work hard. At present, the author's writing style is really good and the logic is clear (I just don't know how to write emotional scenes). Maybe you can become the most beautiful Xiaoai fan in my mind as a post-00s generation 🤓

The identity arrangement at the beginning is really disgusting. The soul can be transported but not the soul, and the clothes are not worn. The face is the same as the original owner and different from myself. The DNA is different from the original owner. The original owner will receive the hidden benefits and will not recognize anything else. Refute me, then why not arrange the clothes? Anyway, it is a false identity to start. Especially the contact with the heroine is caused by the original owner, either the memory body is inherited together, or the normal acquaintance, I thought you were him, after the contact, I like you 🪖

Personally, the biggest problem I feel is that the protagonist's character design is poor and frustrating to watch, and there is also the conflict between the protagonist's thoughts and actions. He is usually cautious, but the investigation about Hanada Emi is like a stubborn child. The author would like to talk about the series of investigations about Hanada Emi. In addition to enhancing the protagonist's sense of existence in the eyes of the organization and making the protagonist's situation more dangerous, what's the point? Finally, let's talk about it. The character design is really bad. The plot is not bad. If you change your understanding, the results may be much better. This character design is really disgusting.

This plot is really great! Anyway, I can't accept it. Hanada pushed Takato off the cliff to kill him. After Miyano Shiho knew this, he gave Hanada an anesthetic in anger. Yes, you read it right. Faced with Hanada who killed Mitarai Kyousuke and pushed Takato off the cliff, Miyano Shiho just used anesthetics to take revenge, and then nothing happened to Hanada 🤤. After a few chapters, Hanada was afraid that her relationship with Gao Yuan would be revealed to the winery, so she ran back to beg Hanada and finally reached an agreement. Later, she also helped Hanada fake her death and escape. This magical thing is really great!

I am a zero-time party member and paid money just to scold you. You are completely described as a yandere. The protagonist saves you, but you actually want to make the protagonist smaller just for a joke, and you still feel the pain of being smaller in the name of it. Being bigger and smaller is inherently painful, and being weak after becoming smaller is also painful. You only have the process of getting smaller and the weakness after becoming smaller, but you want the protagonist to experience the triple pain of becoming bigger and smaller and the pain of being weak after becoming smaller. This does not include the pain of teasing the protagonist, and the protagonist has just experienced it once in a dream, and will have to go through it again when he wakes up. The protagonist does not owe you anything. You have only saved the protagonist once, but the protagonist has saved you many times. Your sister plotted against the protagonist, and the protagonist also saved your sister (although you don't know). Just like a perfect person becomes a vegetative state and can only rely on drugs to move slowly, you actually want the protagonist, a perfect person, to become a vegetative state just for a joke, and the protagonist is different. He has to lose consciousness step by step and recover step by step after the experience. The process of loss and recovery is also accompanied by pain. Also, drugs are a serious issue. What to do if they can't change, what to do if something goes wrong. The co-author must not only be plotted by your sister, but also be your guinea pig and toy. Even if the protagonist takes over the body of the original owner, the protagonist has already paid back what he deserves, so why should he have to suffer this kind of crime?

Xiao Ai's writing was quite normal before. Why did she suddenly write like this? And what does your explanation mean? It seems that it is entirely the hero's fault and not hers, and you are still "angry"? The hero is still helping her like this, and this is how you repay her? It's like feeding an unfamiliar wolf, and the male protagonist actually thinks it's his own fault? What the hell kind of logic is this? To be honest, I have read not too many but not less than 3 fanfics with Haibara as the male protagonist. You are the first one I have seen like this. It is so fucking novel.

Great, there is no heroine now, and I can't stop having sex with men until I vomit 😰😰😰, The heroine Xiaoai is great, you can look forward to it

The protagonist, a time-traveler, is familiar with the plot, and is still the heir of the consortium. Now he is so disgusted by Hanada, deliberately abusing the master, so many people from the red side do not ask for help, and they are usually very reckless when solving cases, but they are scared to death when they meet the organization. Is Hakuba's father a red side, and Hattori's father is not a red side? They have to carry it to their death, but they can't carry it. The organization is not a god. With the plot advantage, a sneak attack can kill several people. I feel aggrieved and gave up.

I feel that the author wants to write a mystery novel more than a Conan fan novel. This is not to be derogatory. The case design is quite good. The problem is that some of the lines are too long and you have to go to the front to think about it. It feels a bit tiring to read. I haven't seen the back part yet. I stopped before reuniting with the black organization. I'll catch up again when I have time. I'm really looking forward to the candy in this book. There are places to eat in the front. How can I put it? I feel that the candy in this book will not be overwhelming. It's quite good.

To be honest, the plot where the protagonist jumped out in front of the female supporting character and yelled at the robber who had just beaten the security guard, "You have already got the money, so don't commit any more sins" made me wait for a long time before I reopened the book.

Aijiang

Let's talk about the advantages first 1. The writing is better and the character portrayal is more profound 2. The original plot is reasonable and the details and clues of the case are described Good, so that the case is closed reasonably instead of being closed casually and nonsensically 3. There are more original Black characters, which adds more activity to the organization The next step is the shortcomings 1. It is too procrastinating and the pace is too slow, so that more than 3.7 Million words are still written about the early events. The key figures on both sides have hardly appeared, and there are very few people who have interacted with each other. To be honest, the main plot has hardly promoted much in the 1500 chapters 2. As for the golden fingers of the protagonist, apart from one or two, to be honest, the others are of little use. The trial of a world can drag on for 7,800 chapters without any progress, and the trial of the sub-type cards can also drag on for hundreds of chapters. The justice card has almost never been used since I got it, and I have not practiced the blessing firearms myself. There is no difference if I give it a blank card. 3. The protagonist is too self-righteous, and his character gradually collapses. Don't let go of the opportunity to develop your own power. You must like to fight alone. As a result, he was in danger too many times in the plot, and Xiao Ai was taken with him. I don't want to recognize my original identity or my family, but I want to enjoy the convenience brought to me by my family relatives, and I may rely on my family to carry out certain actions in the future. And that's what I said at the beginning. I took the gun from Vodka in the middle of the article. I didn't use it for life or death. I can check the gun serial number information on it, not to mention whether a criminal will polish off the gun serial number. I don't give you a chance to investigate, and it can't be investigated by the police now. You have no next step. Can you practice shooting first? The winery is not a believer. Once there is a confrontation, they will definitely use swords and guns. Why don't you practice shooting to give yourself more confidence? 4. There are problems with the character design of the protagonist group, and the biggest problem is Conan. The setting in the original book is that of an upright Demon of Light , but in this book it is written as a lone wolf who only knows how to enter without any thought and does not let anyone intervene. He is unique in that as long as he encounters any more dangerous cases (no mention of organizational activities, just an assassination), he is not allowed to contact the police or anything else, and he has to do it himself. It's normal for characters to change, but the Conan you changed has turned into a big piece of sand. 5. The personality is holy. You may not be able to tell it in the early stage, but after the mid-term, the protagonist becomes more and more holy. I don't know if I was too lax about the organization or what, but I didn't prepare anything for Junai's arrival, and didn't consider the possibility of organized action. The three of them faced Junai's offensive in a completely naked posture. It's all based on Xiao Ai's words, and you also wrote that Xiao Ai is not sure how Junai behaves. Then he was almost wiped out by Junai, and then arranged for Koizumi Anko's sudden rescue. Isn't it completely unnecessary? Junai's brainwashing has no effect at all, so it is better to do it directly to avoid future troubles and avoid the possibility of backstabbing when he regains consciousness later. 6. The biggest poisonous point is the flower field, so I will discuss it in a separate point. It's all about water for the sake of water, and utilization for the sake of utilization. A character who should have been offline long ago can still stand firm for hundreds of chapters. I don't understand what the author thinks. Hua Tian tried to kill the protagonist three times, but the protagonist spared Hua Tian three times. How about playing with this? The first time Hua Tian successfully poisoned his predecessor, just pretend that you don't care about your predecessor's experience, forget it. The second time he repaid evil with kindness, he immediately turned against the protagonist after he saved Huatian, and pushed the protagonist off the cliff, which almost ended. He also brought Xiao Ai to the rescue, but was chased by the organization and almost died. In this way, the protagonist later protected her and sent her abroad, letting her go! I was really shocked! Well, you said that Huatian did play a role in the subsequent operation against Kamu , and the effect was achieved, I also think you were right. In the third time in the United States, I chased you for three streets and emptied the magazine. How could I still feel guilty about Hanada and not kill her, and let her go? The best thing for this character is to take her offline immediately after the incident of sending her abroad. The characteristic of this character so far is that he is crazy, completely uncontrollable, and does things based entirely on his own ideas. Who would put a time bomb next to them like a precious egg? According to the previous precognitive dream, this character can even live to ten years later, what can I say? In summary, you can read this book as a relatively pure mystery novel. If you have not read Conan, you can read it as a mystery novel.

It's OK that the writing is quite delicate and logical, but there are no small points that pop up every now and then to disgust you. Author, don't you feel that you are a little bit crazy about the plot and foreshadowing? The behavioral logic of all the characters serves your foreshadowing. In order to advance the plot smoothly, you can even portray the male protagonist as mentally retarded. If you find something, you either pretend to be stupid and say that there is nothing wrong with it and just ignore it as foreshadowing. The same goes for the high IQ design of the supporting characters. You can make the protagonist invisible, but what does it mean if you kick him into the miscellaneous fish atmosphere group? The IQ of daily cases is super high, but once he gets into the main plot, he is like a fool, and the IQ fluctuates back and forth like an electrocardiogram. You always have to hold back twice in the middle of a case. The key is to continue to take it next time. It can be said that except for the slight increase in force value, I have not seen any growth in the male protagonist. Not to mention that you gain wisdom after every experience. Are you not going to push the plot without some twists and turns? Or what? If you have stepped on the pitfalls, can't the male protagonist be more cautious and logical next time? Also, I always rely on luck when escaping from death. Don't you think it's very dramatic in your writing? The plot is realistically portrayed, and the comeback depends entirely on the halo of the male protagonist. Haha, can you use your brain to make a good layout?

I followed several Conan fanfics at the same time, some were unfinished, some were eunuchs, some were half-dead and delayed in updating, but you were the only one who persisted in updating every day for ten years. I had almost forgotten all the plots, but when I remembered to take a look, you were still updating 😂

It's rare to see a Conan fanfic that doesn't make the main character ridiculous and doesn't get involved in being a mole in a winery and being gay. The important thing is that the sense of oppression of the winery is revealed, the sense of oppression as an organization, not the way of writing about mysterious fortified gin. I hope the author will stick to it!

Poison test report. Let's talk about the advantages first. The writing is fluent, the logic is rare and rigorous, and there are no daily embarrassing behaviors caused by insufficient life experience that often appear in fans. But except for the logic, everything else is not good. To mention a few obvious poisonous points, Xiao Ai's emotional basis for the protagonist is the predecessor of Soul Transmitter. Two, I saw that almost 100 chapters in, there are already several cases where the protagonist and Shinichi are going on at the same time. I feel a bit delayed even if I read them together, let alone the drug chase that is updated every day. Three characters OOC, the criminal sent Shinichi a crime notice to challenge his classmates, but Shinichi did not call the police and accepted the challenge, and then the protagonist saved the situation and told the police about the threatening letter. Brother, this is Shinichi, not Conan. The anime Kuroji first appeared in the diplomat murder case. Heiji used the case as a game to decide the outcome and was criticized by Conan. I have the impression that Conan's basic respect for life is still good after Moonlight Island, let alone Shinichi. It's true that this kind of lowering the original work and pretending to be the main character is true.

There must be something wrong with the author. He always inserts other branches into consecutive chapters, which makes people uncomfortable. He wants to show off his writing skills but ends up imitating others. Can't he write a complete story?

The promotion case was a huge failure at the beginning. He was set to be one of the top ten bosses in the game, but he had no motivation to improve the game's evaluation. Faced with the low score given by the system, he didn't want to reflect on what he didn't do well enough and where he could improve. Let's not talk about the cheats that Ke Xue World relies on. Is it appropriate for the protagonist to muddle along like this? As a ranked online game, someone who has not reflected on his past cases and actively improved his game-related skills and habits, is it really possible to reach the top of the entire server?

I have been following the update for a long time and I have some thoughts that I am not happy with. Let's talk about the advantages first. This book has fulfilled my biggest request for Conan fans so far: a bad case. The author's magical modifications to the original cases and borrowed cases are eye-catching. Regardless of whether the modifications are good or not, as long as you are willing to put in the effort to correct them, it is already pretty good without fixing any major bugs. There are also hidden clues about the organization between many incidents. At the same time, there is no direct sex with the classic red and black macho men (such as Amuro and his police academy friends, Akai, Gin, etc.), And there is no flirtation with any of the female characters. It can be said that in terms of plot, this is the best Conan fanfic I have read. Then what I want to say is that the protagonist's character and interpersonal relationships are too "floating".         ，，， But there is a problem. The shaping of the protagonist is all focused on his performance in the event. The protagonist's response in daily interactions is so "perfect" that as of the latest chapter, I can't grasp the specific distinction between other characters in the protagonist's mind. The difference between the protagonist and strangers and Conan seems to be only reflected in the whitelist when the case occurs and the frequency of daily descriptions. There are almost zero positive and warm emotional descriptions of the protagonist such as "happy", "touched" and "pleasant". The protagonist's "rootless duckweed" impression becomes more and more obvious during the communication with friends. I wonder if this is intentional by the author.

No, buddy, when will you finish it? Before the college entrance examination, I was thinking of delaying my study and not reading the novel. I would just wait for you to finish it and then finish it in one go. Now that I am about to graduate from college, you haven't finished it yet. . .

To be honest, the story and logic of this book are very good, but the writing is really bad, especially towards the end, it gets worse and worse. It feels like I am just trying to make up the word count, and it feels like I am cheating readers out of their money. I really can't stand it.

Do you take the organization too seriously? If the underground organization born in that big-ass place in Japan is so powerful that it can always ride on the head of the American intelligence agency, then why should it hide in the underground? Just stack more vests. I feel that many Conan fans make the Karasuma faction seem to be omnipotent, which is outrageous. Are you blind to think that you are the American father of little Japan?