My Scientific Cultivation in A Mortal's Journey

The quality of the fanfics about mortals cultivating immortals is considered to be at the top of the scale among mortal fanfics. He also does a good job in shaping the characters and handling interpersonal relationships. The author has a very rich imagination and often comes up with some strange things. Furthermore, it does not completely follow the main line, which is equivalent to opening a new branch line to enter the mortal world. The method of cultivating immortals is not copied mechanically but is innovative. So far, there are no poisonous points and the writing is smooth, with occasional surprises. Overall, it can be regarded as an excellent novel about cultivating immortals, and Keliu is indeed eye-catching. But as a fan novel, it also handles the relationship with the protagonist well. It is not licking or blackening, so it is a novel that can be read.

Personally, I think it's average. Except for the scientific cultivation of immortality, which is a bit interesting, the plot is not much different from the original work. It's understandable that major events remain unchanged, but the protagonist doesn't use his foresight to change small things, which is quite boring.

This protagonist has so many shits. He is either injured or on the way to being injured. He is like a disaster star. He is riddled with a lot of troubles. He has a lot of shit. He is like a holy mother who keeps trying to get things done. What else can he do to me? Is this still a story about mortals cultivating immortality? I can't understand all the nonsense about scientific cultivation of immortality. In the future, the world will be destroyed at every turn (laughing to death)

Mortal fans can take a look and reminisce about the new story. It's pretty good.

I can't understand it as I look at it. It always introduces the so-called principles of scientific cultivation of immortality. I don't understand whether it is to mention the required things so many times to make up the word count or for some other purpose.

During Qi training, I survived being attacked by strong men. During the golden elixir training, I had to fight with Nascent Soul. It was very annoying to watch.