In One Piece, but with a Death Note
人在海贼，却给了死神面板
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.7M Words
- Genre
- Anime & ACG
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qimao
Synopsis
All-time: Popularity, Must-read votes.
686Chapters
310kPopularity
908Readers
654Must-read votes
8.8Score
1.1kRatings
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Reader comments 19
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So stupid that I gave up the book! The knife made with his own soul fragments (in ancient times, he used his own blood to fight the general Mo Xie) was given away! Okay, just give it away, after all, I can't control my lower body. I don't like the protagonist who teaches me how to use the knife after giving him the knife [playing the princes with beacon fire]. Good sword
The integration of the system is too casual, and it is obvious that the intelligence is changed at any time. The characteristic that the Zanpakutō is more likely to hurt the soul is not reflected at all. Moreover, the Zanpakutō is the embodiment of your own soul, and you do not give it to others only after you have given it the ability. Reiatsu is not omnipotent. The battle between Shinigami is a battle of Reiatsu, but if there is a body, then there are two different systems.
There are too many Pirates fanfics, so once the writing is poor, it will appear even worse when compared with other excellent fanfics. Chaotic fighting power, extremely crude battles, numerous exaggerated typos, a lot of inexplicable psychological activities like narration, countless things like messages from the author inexplicably inserted into the middle of the normal plot, two-thirds of it is nonsense, the whole book is like a crayfish, and 800,000 of the one million words are garbage that can be thrown away directly.
The intelligence, character relationships, strength levels, and plot are just like children's playing house.
So, what is the identity of the protagonist that can make Im like this?
Momonosuke is not injured or dead
Intelligence-reducing gadgets
The writing is very good, and the protagonist is vividly written, just like us office workers in reality, who are extremely aggrieved and swallowing their anger. (The personal reason may be that I am not used to it)
Author, what is your logic? If you don't have spiritual power, others can't learn his steps. Then everyone in this world, except the protagonist, has no spiritual power. You let Momo Usagi, who has no spiritual power, learn to unlock the Zanpakutō. How can you show Shirayuki? What do you think, everyone can be a shinigami? I really hate it, it's too bad.
Friends who like pirates can turn around, this book can directly make Hongwen