A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: Starting as a Rogue Cultivator

To sum up, the protagonists Wang Li and Han Li both have a sky bottle. They cultivated immortality 10 years in advance of Han Li. They relied on the perspective of a half-god to gain opportunities. They gradually discovered that Wangyu's power system has Han Li's wisdom-reducing aura (which means that Han Li's combat power will be reduced by three points when encountering Han Li). It is a bit ironic about the original power system and Han Li's too selfish and unworthy human identity. He took in four wives, the dragon's body, Han Zhi, Zi Ling, Bao Hua, and a group of furnace concubines. When Han Li reached the middle stage of Mahayana, the protagonist had already cultivated more than 2,000 human Mahayana people with the Sky Palm Ping Guang, and they were almost able to fight across levels, and were approximately equal to true spirits. During the period of more than a dozen true immortals in the lower realm, the protagonist set up traps and killed almost all the true immortals in the lower realm and all the Mahayana in Xiao Nanzhou, and it was over when he ascended to the immortal realm. Overall it looks pretty good

At the beginning of the game, I negotiated terms with a Jindan family, and they talked so much that it was a slap in the face. It says at the back that the whole world revolves around the protagonist. I also want to disgust Han Li. It's a completely mindless and cool novel. When you meet other people, your IQ will drop immediately and everyone will circle around the protagonist.

The whole article is full of nonsense, frivolous, innocuous, and irritating? You are irritating the sea!

It's so long-winded that I can't stand it.

This book is really a bit dusty. The writing is really good. I have a very deep understanding of the original work and the logic is clear. I have corrected all the unreasonable things in the original work. I really recommend it to mortal lovers. It is very enjoyable to read.

What do you say? It's very weak, and the plot is relatively bland. It doesn't have as many ups and downs as the original work, and I can tell you are a complete noob, but I really love mortals, and it will get better later on. If I were to rate it, I would give it about 6-7 points. Anyway, keep it up and look forward to more excellent works.

I don't know if it's about the writing style or something else. It's wordy, and the plot is pretty fast, but sometimes I can't understand the point of view from which it was written. I read two hundred pictures, all of which were skipped, and it looked very awkward. I didn't understand whether the protagonist was imagining or something. Which point of view should this book be read from? The dialogue is particularly stiff. Such a good subject matter is really a waste.

Between the lines, I feel that the original author is not good enough, and Han Li is not good enough. From a God's perspective, I feel that he is very talented, his words and deeds are frivolous, and he can't even control the two ounces of flesh on his crotch. If he were thrown into a strange fantasy world, it would be difficult to be a waiter in a restaurant.

It's so verbose, 90% of it is nonsense.

It's too watery. Such a good subject is wasted.