Douluo Dalu's God of Wine

It's very interesting to watch. It doesn't have the feeling of becoming invincible all of a sudden. The protagonist becomes stronger bit by bit. He doesn't target Tang San to steal his opportunity from the beginning like other online articles. Instead, he catches up with Tang San step by step and then surpasses him. If the auxiliary soul master lacks combat power, he uses ancient martial arts to make up for it. I think this is a good point.

Comments may contain spoilers, read with caution The story basically follows the important plot of the original work, and the ending ends very hastily. Although the last chapter is very long, there is at least one or two chapters that need to be explained. (More spoilers below) The relationship with the characters in the original work is handled very well, and it is a conflict that develops normally, but there are certain problems with the scene opposite Tang San. The author intends to write Tang San as the protagonist's rival's goal, but from the moment the protagonist officially fights with Tang San, the protagonist suppresses Tang San. It is difficult for this opponent to match the strength. And when Tang San is stronger than the protagonist, the protagonist can still be regarded as Tang San's teammate. As for the treatment of the heroine, it is still a harem. From the beginning of my ambiguous relationship with the lead actress, I thought it was a one-shot deal. Later, the old relationship started to rekindle, and several more harem members were added. In the later stage, the lead actress's role was obviously less than that of the others, and the relationship was also much worse. The lead actress's name didn't even appear in the final scene of the finale. There are also many problems with the handling of supporting characters. Ye Shi is the hero's first teacher, and later the teacher is punished for a ridiculous reason. Later, when the hero distributes the secret medicine (tentative title), he does not give it to Ye Shi, even the village chief and the eldest brother who awakens the martial spirit. (By the way, the protagonist's opportunity came too unexpectedly and too casually) There are also four other people in the team who grew up with the hero and heroine. At first, they thought they were passers-by. Later, they formed a team and brought them with them, which also gave them benefits. At first, I really didn't expect these characters to be so effective (to name and praise Tori, his performance was very impressive), but later on, these people were ignored. Although there is a reason not to take them with them in the trial, there should be a better way to get out. These four people were found to be unavailable in the early stage, and they shined brightly in the mid-term. However, they were also found to be unavailable in the later stage. Use them when you think of them, and throw them away after they are used up. This is how I feel about these people. . . What a pity. There is also a bit of criticism in the text. The descriptions of some costumes and female characters' bodies are a bit too frequent. There is also a word "extreme". The frequency of this word has affected my spirit. Now I see this word and it is very funny. All in all, it is a very good novel. The plot development is basically normal. Most of the parts are not included in the drama. The conflict with the original work is not abrupt. It is also a rare Douluo novel that does not abuse, scold or systemize. (The abuse and scolding here have some of my own understanding, which may be different from what others think) Well worth reading

They all joined the Spirit Hall, and yet they ended up licking Tang San. It was really disgusting.

It's a bit uncomfortable. First of all, the part where I go to Shrek is just a copy of the original work. Then I get a sword. It's too ridiculous. The weapons made by the Douluo Master are all rubbish for martial arts. There is also Tang San who knows that he is a wanderer and still pursues him. Is this to pave the way for an adventure? This foreshadowing is so rubbish, I feel so embarrassed that I almost got cancer.

I came to read this book after reading The Coffin of Zhen Shi Tong. To be honest, this book is a bit difficult to review. There is no problem with licking Tang San, but the problem is that you have already joined Wuhun Palace in the beginning, and later went to Shrek. Obviously you already have the lowest soul power in Shrek, but you still have no time to lick Ning Rongrong. The writing is poor and the plot is poor. First of all, Shrek was afraid that major changes would affect the original plot, so he wanted to follow the plot. However, he suddenly arranged an original plot in the middle. It was very abrupt and blunt, and I couldn't understand the purpose of that plot. The novel is not exciting at all, and it is not a matter of brainlessness. No matter how rigorous the novel is, there is no reasonable plot advancement and certain exciting points. How can people continue to read it? It has been suppressing the protagonist's strength, euphemistically calling it growth, even if it is just an assistant, it still has to follow the road of fighting souls. The only wine gourd that improves the body is shared with others. It is inherently inferior to others, but they still make progress together. I have been exercising since I was a child, but none of my soul rings have reached the maximum age. Go find a piece of tofu.

Forget it, I'm leaving. I don't like the main character's bad personality, good guy, and a bit of a stronghead. I feel like the mother-in-law is hard to like.

How can I put it, the current readers of the Seven Cat Douluo fandom are too demanding, or too violent, and cannot accept the content as long as it is slightly uncomfortable. Of course, the readers definitely have the right to make comments. I just want to say that after all, it is a fan-derived creation. I just didn't like the original work and wanted to read it. For other plots, look at the plots that can satisfy your own fantasies, so we should be more tolerant. The author cannot satisfy every reader. The fan creation itself is written around the original work. I know that many people want to see the world of Douluo Continent instead of Tang San, because the character of Tang San is well portrayed. Some people don't like it, but they really like the setting of Douluo Continent. Let's think about it from another angle. Douluo Continent is a world created by the third master of the Tang family. Fan authors more often have to rely on the settings of the original text. In some settings, they can only try their best to complete them, which is inevitable. There will be some flaws. In the final analysis, if you want to read Douluo Continent but don't want to read Douluo Continent written by the third young master of the Tang family, isn't that just nonsense? I can feel that the author of this book has worked very hard to balance the needs and feelings of different readers, but after all, it is still fan fiction. To put it bluntly, you have to copy the original work. Douluo Dalu is a fantasy enlightenment novel for many people. If nothing else, the third young master of the Tang family is absolutely very powerful. He makes many readers feel that Douluo Dalu existed from the beginning, and that what the third young master of the Tang family wrote was just the story of Tang San in Douluo Dalu. I subconsciously ignored that the illusory world of Douluo Continent was originally created by the third young master of the Tang family, so it is not easy for fan authors. I have also tried to write Douluo fanfics. You will know when you write them. I don't talk about the protagonist's camp and these outlines. It's enough for you to just set the protagonist's birthplace and martial spirit. I wrote the first chapter of 2,000 words, and it's already almost Notting College, let alone a million-word plot, so let's all be tolerant and read it with an appreciative attitude.

Licking Ning Rongrong made me feel very uncomfortable. Even though Ning Rongrong did that before, the protagonist still licked her, and the protagonist ignored Lin Xiaoxiao at all. Later, I didn't know, but this character was actually created. There should be some story. Is he a tool man?

The setting is a bit weird, a level 9 auxiliary force with a gun spirit? Who gave you the courage? If you don't have a skill or a golden finger, you should just keep doing it without being embarrassed... Won't an injury delay your cultivation? Who are Shrek's teachers? They are all those who have conflicts with Wuhun Hall or are excluded by Wuhun Hall. Can people they teach join Wuhun Hall? What do you think about letting two genius kids go to Shrek? Is the Spirit Hall not as good as Shrek? Are you wasting your golden development period to experience life at the grassroots level... If you know the protagonist of the plot, look at what kind of life the common people live in the back. As a Holy Mother, shouldn't you restrain the mistress gang? I thought the doctor's start was set up to grab the fairy grass. The time between birth or time travel in the early stage and the soul master competition is the basis for the protagonist to surpass the mistress gang. If you don't grab resources, you must at least inhibit their growth. If you are a commoner and have no backer and no golden finger of skills, how can you surpass the mistress in the early stage who has the help of fairy grass, Haotian Douluo, Poison Douluo, and Liuli Sect's protection? All teammates have a backing... If you are a civilian and don't have a backer to look for, and you don't have the resources to grab resources, the right solution is to commit suicide and seek death. Hahaha! Simple view for reference

Hating Ning Rongrong while spending her money is too 6