Douluo: My Wife Is the Silver Dragon King

I was too anxious to finish it later, and I couldn't compile the soul core anymore; and where are the eggs of the Fire Dragon King in the Dragon Valley? Also, there was so much nonsense at the beginning that I almost couldn't read it anymore. It ruined a novel in just one sentence. But the middle period was pretty good, and the battle plot was a bit sparse. It was better to write about killing evil soul masters than to write about competitions. There was too much about romance, but overall it was still very good, unlike other Douluo fellows. People are written as studs and accept everything. Some women are not worthy of being heroines at all. There are also brothers who recognize brothers everywhere and will only get you into trouble. For example, Xu Lizhi is a loser and very ordinary. There is also the meeting between Le Zhengyu and Yuan Enhuihui. It is disgusting to death. This kind of person does not deserve to be in Shrek.

The first 200 chapters are okay. I started writing when I was 6 years old. It appeared in the article countless weeks and months later. A few years later it took 4 years to reach level 1-39. It took 4 years from 39 to 44, and I became the Creator at the age of 17. It gets outrageous later on, every chapter is about practicing, gaining points, and sleeping with the heroine. Just taking a nap with the heroine can fill half a chapter (there are many chapters like this) A running account of practicing, using plug-ins to add points, sleeping, and looping playback... Everything else you write is like an outline. Give the boss a name, and then finish the fight within a hundred words, killing him instantly with one move. Author, how empty is your inspiration to write such a book? The key is that in this film, no enemy (basically no enemy) can survive past one chapter. There are less scenes than sleeping in the bedroom. There are no soul beasts, no enemies, and the opponent cannot survive more than half a chapter. Upgrading depends on hanging up every day to practice VR and fight monsters (spiritual ascension platform and so on). This is at best an outline, with at least half of the words in the middle written by the system to add points and sleep. The content is extremely empty

Has the author never seen a woman? . . When describing emotions, I felt embarrassed. Every time I saw a dialogue describing emotions, I quickly turned over it and vomited. When I wrote it, the protagonist was a woman and I thought: Wow, so handsome. Especially when it comes to Ye Xinglan, it's so disgusting, and the good reviews are just like the bad ones. Didn't you say that your technique can create your own godly position? Why don't you go and do that Dragon God inheritance thing? If you don't know how to write an emotional drama, then don't write it. It's so embarrassing and feels like it was written by an elementary school student. I really don't know what makes it so good-looking for those who think it looks good? There are also many problems with the settings in the novel. For example, the soul can grow indefinitely. The soul can grow infinitely in its lifespan. It has nothing to do with bloodline restrictions. , Just like the Tianmeng Ice Silkworm can turn a boat into a million-year-old soul beast by swallowing Wanzai Xuan Ice Water, let alone a soul. The plot also follows the original work, and it feels like the protagonist has been replaced by an enhanced version of Tang Wulin, but the personality is not as good as Tang Wulin. It feels like she can't move her legs as a woman, and she has to be ambiguous.

I keep repeating some words and phrases and it makes me sick one day, one week, one month, one year later. . . .

This book is just a good idea to put down your mind and read! ! ! The combat power of this book increased too quickly. It took more than 300 chapters of the book to complete the first five chapters and the next ten chapters. No enemy survived a chapter, there were not many soul beasts and soul masters fighting, there were too few fighting scenes, and I had never been to my home after entering school. Doing bad things with the heroine could fill a chapter and a half. And the strength is seriously wrong, from a second ring with a strength of 30,000 kilograms to a seventh ring with a strength of tens of thousands of tons. In the later stage, it was already unfinished, and various opportunities were imposed on the protagonist. And some contents are seriously inconsistent with the original text.

It's really poisonous. A second ring weighs 30,000 kilograms, right? Do you know how much the Poseidon Trident weighs? It weighs 18,000 kilograms and even the Ultimate Douluo can't lift it. Take a closer look, how fragile it is.

The more I read, the less interesting I became. I basically skipped reading.

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I've finished reading it, but I didn't read the extras. I was able to read the whole thing. I really tried my best. I would like to comment here to give my own opinions to future book friends. First of all, there are many settings in this book that are not in line with the original setting. When you read it from the beginning, it actually doesn't feel very big, but the more you go to the end, the more outrageous it becomes. Many of the things written by the author are not consistent with reality. For example, how old you are at the beginning, but become smaller at the end. And that evolutionary point may be okay at the beginning, but it will become very unreasonable later, and then a large part of it is related to love. Although it matches the name of the book, the writing is disgusting and makes people uncomfortable. Even I don't know if men and women in love are so embarrassing to watch. This is also a big problem with this book. Then there is the problem of writing faster and faster later in the book, but to be honest, many current novels actually have this problem. I admit that the author is doing the best he can without cutting off half of his life, but it is true that the writing becomes more and more outrageous as he goes on, not to mention the collapse of combat power. If he doesn't Thinking about it, I actually have no problem reading the first 3/4 of this book. Well, maybe most of my comments seem unfriendly to the author, but I did finish reading it and then gave my evaluation. I hope future book friends can see it.

It's so good. This is the best Dou 3 novel I've ever read, bar none.