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The writing is good, but the system does not have much need to exist. However, it can be seen that the author is also downplaying the system in the later period. When the protagonist is bonded with his teammates, he can focus on describing the family relationship. After all, it is a good description of a rural family whose parents support their children in playing e-sports. It is also written that the protagonist is not used to the existence of his parents when he has just traveled through time. However, I feel that some of the plots in the game are a bit confusing. Maybe it's because I haven't played S7 before. Overall, it's good. I support the author.

I think it's okay, the description of the battle is okay, but the rest is a bit unsatisfactory. The failure is that after time travel, there are parents, but the protagonist's behavior is really hard to agree with. There is also the charity, which is better than not mentioning it. The most important thing is the protagonist's character. It was quite likable at the beginning, but later on when the character became so-called mature, it became a bit unsatisfactory. There is no sufficient reason for the label that he loves money, it is better not to be more likeable.

"Now the four of EDG don't have to worry about the big dragon anymore, they just go straight to the EDG highland tower to kill them. The one on the opposite side has the shortest resurrection time of thirty or forty seconds, so they can definitely do it in one wave!"

I feel that the ending was written by a different person because in the early stage, the team called the protagonist Ye Zi, and in the later stage, they all called Z God, which was a bit outrageous, and winning the basic game was a bit ridiculous.

The name of the protagonist is born with a rhythm. Yezi, Uzi, crazy puppy, your name is born with the feeling of a supporting role.

It's ok but a bit short

Tasteless

It seems to be ordinary, this is a time travel + system. Even with the system, it does not reflect the dominance of the protagonist. It is difficult to fight every game, and the ones without the system can still have higher values ​​​​than the protagonist. As mentioned earlier, the protagonist has broken through to SS level. How difficult is it to beat two people who are close to S level? There is also this broken system. If you add Happy Water, the Snickers bar is useless. Why do they pay you for advertising? It's just unsatisfactory to watch

Even those who don't play LoL are very excited to watch it.

I guess it's because I didn't make any money, so the writing was a bit confusing.