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Does S7 Luna do high damage? 😅Please do your homework, you might as well forget about the S7 mythical version, I can't stand it anymore

It was a bit fun to read, but the writing was a bit invincible. It was like killing everything indiscriminately. If the player is very strong, he would kill other players like chickens. Of course, the novel is just more fun to read.

In the latest chapter, it feels like the protagonist is a little out of character. E-sports is still a game after all. Don't blame me, I'm just telling the truth

The s7 version is too deformed. Find a stable AD who can move and move A, and then use the brainless incense burner. I can go from Silver 3 to Platinum 2 with Lulu and Nami, but S8 can't even go up to Gold after a big change. . .

I think you can change the title of your book. What do you call a professional anchor, a part-time career? When I saw the title of your book, I thought it was mainly about live broadcasts and daily life. It turns out that nm is all about playing games and there are very few live broadcasts. It's exactly the same as your last book. So what's the point of finishing your last book?

Let me briefly share my opinions. The first one is that the pace is too fast. Although it is a game article, daily life is also very important, and interpersonal relationships can be appropriately embellished. I have watched Bai Xiaochun of Ergen Master and have almost forgotten the story, but as a writing master, he really grasps the rhythm of the article well. First it is daily comedy, then there is conflict between characters and events, then there is the climax, and then there is the usual funny plot. In the author's book, I saw that the past was water. What did the protagonist do? Play faker, score points in solo queue, join a professional team, and play games. I think you need to set the stage. For example, faker won the championship, so some friends discussed this issue in your live broadcast room, such as the invincible faker, and then the protagonist was not convinced and complained casually. I also played rank with faker, so it was just like that. Well, then he gets sprayed. At this time, the protagonist can pretend to be a b and use his own account to check the results. If he finds that this is wrong, he changes his account and checks again, revealing that he has several Korean server ranking accounts. Then he will continue the mission, and then go back to the beginning and use his account to rank fakers. This makes it smoother, instead of just going straight up to fake the task. This is no longer simply fun, but rather, a bit brainless? Of course, I am not teaching the author how to write a book. I am just giving an example. I just hope that the author can promote the development of the plot through character conflicts. Your outline is in chapter 19. I think it is very good. It means that you can definitely write these 19 chapters into 60 chapters or even 90 chapters. The second problem is the system. Although the system can be used to solve any problem, the system is not omnipotent after all. Moreover, the system has not been introduced clearly, which made me a little stunned. The system gives the protagonist talents. At least you can use a few more words to introduce more, and the number of words is not enough? If you feel sorry for the hydrology, update it more. If you update it more, no one will think you are sloppy.

The lol articles are of average to average quality. I spent 2 days reading them intermittently and read them several times before I saw the ones listed on the shelves. How can I say everything is fine. There are so many loopholes in some game writing that almost every chapter has them. If you put it all together, those who often read this kind of article will be very sensitive and unable to read it at all. Forget it, I can't say what it feels like, just leave it at that.

Mr. Dai was disgusted and successfully prevented Feike from becoming the Four Crown Champion, otherwise I would have thought that Feike was alive because of Ye Xiu

The bold author, dares to order the eternal God, be careful to punish God 😡😡😡

What's going on? Why did it suddenly end? It's unfinished, and you're off-topic as you write. You're off-topic, so you just keep writing. Why is it unfinished? It was obviously a live broadcast article, but it turned into an e-sports article.