Pro Streamer, Part-Time Pro Player

S7 Luna had high damage? 😅 Please do your research. You might as well just say S7 was the Mythic meta. I can't stand it anymore.

It was quite enjoyable to read, but the writing was a bit too overpowered. He seemed to be indiscriminately killing everyone, and the other players were so strong that it felt like he was just slaughtering them like chickens. Of course, that's what novels are all about – exciting and entertaining.

The latest chapter felt a bit out of place for the protagonist; esports is still just a game, after all. Don't attack me, I'm just stating the facts.

The Season 7 meta was too unbalanced. You could find a reliable AD carry with good positioning and auto-attacks, then just spam Ardent Censer. I could climb from Silver III to Platinum II with a Janna, Lulu, and Nami combo. Season 8 had a major overhaul, and I couldn't even climb past Gold.

I think you should change the title of your book. What do you mean by "professional streamer"? Is it a part-time job? I thought it would be about live streaming and daily life based on the title, but it's all about competitions. There are very few live streams. It's exactly the same as your last book. What was the point of finishing your last book?

Let me briefly share my thoughts. First, the pacing felt too fast. Although it's a game-themed novel, daily life is also important, and interpersonal relationships can be added appropriately. I've read Er Gen's "Bai Xiaochun," though I've almost forgotten the story, but as a writing master, his pacing was excellent.

The lol writing was below average; I spent two days reading it on and off several times before I finally saw it published. Well, everything is fine. There are so many plot holes in the game descriptions that almost every chapter has them. If you read this kind of story often, you'll be very sensitive to them and won't be able to continue reading. Well, I can't really describe how I feel, so let's just leave it at that.

Mr. Dai is amazing! He successfully prevented Fei Ke from becoming a four-time champion. Otherwise, I would have thought Fei Ke was Ye Xiu reincarnated.

Audacious author, daring to order food from the eternal gods! Beware of divine punishment! 😡😡😡

What happened? How did it suddenly end like that? It's a terrible ending! And you went off-topic while writing? If you went off-topic, just keep writing! How is it a terrible ending? It was supposed to be a live-streaming story, but it turned into an e-sports story.