Tomb Raiding: Building a Family That Lasts Forever

The writing is extremely poor, it's unfinished, I don't know how to fill the holes I dug, I wrote what I wrote before and then again, it's not even the same, even the details are different, it's completely opposite, I don't understand how to write it, was it written by one person?

The protagonist is always a god or something. The author must have been bullied a lot in reality. Also, he is writing about a clan, but the author has always made the protagonist more important than the clan.

It looks good and the story is exciting. This book should be written by an author who has just come from another platform!

Such a good story line makes you write it like this. Remember, if you are uneducated and read more, don't write again in the future, you will easily be beaten to death.

Why is it so confusing to write all kinds of things that are put together? Also, it's too verbose. It can be explained clearly in half a chapter, but it took several chapters.

I feel like there aren't many women in Jiangjia Village?

It's not very good. I just mentioned it in one stroke at the end. It's a bit watery. I'm still looking forward to the story in the future and you just finished it for me. I'm a sloppy writer and I still need to practice_

My heart is dark and I have too many personal thoughts, especially my mentality is somewhat similar to the patients in our hospital.

I have listened to more than 200 chapters now. Please keep up the good work, author.

Why don't you catch ordinary people when you have the strength, let Mao Zong bite them, and then refine them into zombies? Then there will be a steady stream of refined creatures.