Demon’s Diary

The first and middle stages are still okay. It's better than the Mortal Immortal Realm chapter. I hope I can read the Demonic Heaven Chronicles Upper Realm chapter in this life. Among Wangyu's few books, I personally recommend reading Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, which is also the best one.

Dear author, I would like to give you a suggestion. Your writing is very good, but you use the word "get up" too frequently. At the end of many sentences, you use "something got up" or "something got up". To be honest, it makes people feel uncomfortable when reading. In fact, these two words can often be omitted or replaced with other words. I hope the author can read my comments.

Liu Ming, a desperate young man who grew up among countless murderers, escaped from his imprisonment and entered a certain cultivation sect by chance, stepping into an unimaginable world. In this world, Liu Ming faces the danger of losing his mind at any time and transforming into a monster. Despite this, Liu Ming is determined, decisive, affectionate and righteous, and uses his ordinary qualifications and extraordinary mind to embark on his own path to immortality. Liu Ming experienced many adventures on his way to immortality, and had emotional entanglements with many women, such as Jialan, Ye Tianmei, Yao Ji, etc., And went through hardships with them. Liu Ming finally ascended to the upper realm, became a Taoist couple with Jialan and Ye Tianmei, returned to Yunchuan to relive his past affairs in the mortal world, and ascended to the upper realm when his two children were born. In short, in a vast world of cultivation, a complicated world of different continents and different races is constructed. The plot is compact and full of fantasy elements, showing the world lifelikely. However, the storyline is highly similar to ordinary people, lacks novelty, and the quality has declined in the later period.

To be honest, this book is really far worse than ordinary people. Not to mention other things, the mortal Han Lao Mo is so sinister and decisive in killing, this pig's feet are really bad, he is always being used, he is always indecisive, he should kill what should not be killed, he can let go even if he doesn't kill, and it doesn't matter if he is used by others. . He's not the protagonist, he's been played to death long ago

Much worse than ordinary people! 1. The writing of the fights is relatively complicated. It was okay at first, but the more you watch it, the more complex fights become the same every time, with the same moves and routines. 2. The plot is relatively bland, with no suspense or climax! 3. Endless copies and changing maps In summary, this is not like a novel, but like a game, change the map, change the copy, upgrade and spawn monsters!

A pure copy of the cool article under the skin, But every time the male protagonist sees a beautiful woman, he has feelings like a stallion, but there is no female protagonist in more than 900 chapters of the eunuch novel, and he always smiles bitterly, what is the difference between the Urban God of War and the Crooked Dragon King?

I have read the entire book. To sum up, this book is a bad book, and the protagonist Liu Ming is an even worse person. I can't believe this was written by the author of A Mortal's Journey to Immortality. It's really disappointing.

It's a pity that many of the plot arrangements are particularly bad. For example, after Jialan's betrayal, the two met and did not take action directly. This directly shows that the protagonist is extremely selfish and has no righteousness. In terms of human nature, the protagonist becomes extremely mediocre. The plot has no highlights and the worse it gets worse.

It's not bad, although it's a bit worse than ordinary people.

It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away