The Fantasy World in a Box

The book is good and the writing is not bad. But I was thinking that if the protagonist's girlfriend Fangyuan Yuan knew about Bei Mingxue, wouldn't this be a Shura field? If the world view is in the modern Internet era, then polygamy would be unlikely. The author should think carefully about the relationship between these two characters.

A bloody plot, a poorly written old routine. The protagonist is always one step behind, and then the enemy kills some of the protagonist's people, making the readers angry. This bloody plot has been repeated many times before, and there is nothing new.

The plot is very good, and the imagination is great. However, the size of the objects is really not well controlled. I hope the author can focus on the focus and not focus on reality and fantasy. Now it feels like there is no main body.

Come and take a look, everyone, it's very, very, very beautiful. Jiejiejiejie

1. The ending ends suddenly. 2. There are a lot of typos in the middle and later stages. 3. The character names are confusing. 4. When the male protagonist enters the world of boxes, his cultivation level is very low at first, then becomes chaotic, and suddenly improves. 5. Freshly graduated college students who have never experienced any kind of battle can defeat local enemies. 6. He has a talent for cooking out of nowhere. 7. The function of the fourth button is not explained. 8. The origin of the box was not explained. 9. The enemy will die if he enters the box, but the hero's partner will be fine if he enters the box. 10. The regent of the Central Plains, foreign vampires, werewolves, etc. Are all gone.

I don't know what the author's level of education is. For a 1-inch person, if you look at it with a magnifying glass, a grain of rice is bigger than a human. The author has never seen an ant or doesn't know how big an inch is. Many parts of it are written incomprehensibly. Chapter 7 of Testing the Poison is unreadable.