The Underworld's Martial God: Rising from the Coffin

I personally like this work very much, the plot is exciting, the killing is decisive, and it is not cruel! The writing is smooth and the author is very attentive to his creation. Worth collecting!

It's rare 🉐 to come across something good. If the author is bolder, it will be just around the corner!

From the plot setting, the laying out of the plot, to the growth of the characters, I felt pretty good after reading it as a whole. The imagination can be bigger. The demons and monsters from Journey to the West can be introduced into Chinese mythology. And most importantly, summon the heroine!!!

It's rare to see one that you can see through, so I hope you don't go too far!

After reading about ten chapters, I noticed several illogical points. I lost the desire to continue reading. First, the Heavenly Realm Bureau lacked detailed introduction, mostly glossed over, and its hierarchical structure wasn't clearly explained. For an organization established for hundreds of years, why is there no concrete management system? For example, in the Embroidered Uniform Guard, the lowest rank is the Lishi (strongman), above them are the Xiaoqi (small flag officer) or Xiaowei (colonel), then the Xiaoqi manages how many Lishi, then the Zongqi (commander-in-chief) manages how many Xiaoqi, then the Baihu (centurion) manages how many Zongqi, and so on. There should be a strict management and promotion system. But the Heavenly Realm Bureau only provides a general departmental introduction. It's too hasty and perfunctory. Second, it's normal for the protagonist, as an intern, to seek intelligence from the intelligence department during a local assessment mission, but there shouldn't be a subordinate relationship. Why does the intelligence department colleague act like the protagonist's subordinate from the moment they meet? And why should the protagonist, just an intern, demand that regular employees from other departments act like subordinates? There was no prior explanation of any hierarchical relationship between departments! At most, there's respect for the people in the surveillance department. So why does the protagonist just run over and order people around like a subordinate? And the other party treating him like a subordinate is just wrong! Thirdly, how did the protagonist, the so-called constable, see through his disguise? There's no explanation whatsoever. It's just a simple "You finally couldn't resist and made your move," and the other party directly admits it, without any explanation of where the protagonist slipped up. It's like he had some kind of precognitive ability. Fourthly, the protagonist is arrogant but can't defeat the demon and is almost possessed. Then a woman suddenly appears to help him, without any further explanation—she just pops into his head, solves the problem, and then goes back to the beginning, without any foreshadowing or introduction. There are just too many flaws. I've only read about ten chapters and there are already so many illogical points. The rest will probably be full of flaws too. It's really... Unacceptable. I have no desire to continue reading.