Becoming a Brocade Guard, Starting by Plundering Blade Talent

There are actually no comments, so I'll just say a few words. Halfway through the book, I couldn't stand it anymore and abandoned the book halfway through. The things I don't like about this book include disrespect for mathematics, overuse of harems, lack of logic, lack of common sense, etc. This book is okay in other aspects, but the harem and the plot are extensive and frivolous, which poisoned me.

The writing is very good, the early and middle stages are very good, the logic is basically reasonable, and the plot is compact and not procrastinating! Upgrading is great! In the later period, the author's mind was confused, he forgot the previous settings, the names were messed up, and the ending was thrown off! There is only one country and home on the map, and the Xihe Dynasty was visited only once! The fighting power is broken, so it can only end quickly! "Talent entry system! Host: Ye Liuyun! Realm: Early Grand Master/Level 5 Warlock Martial Arts: Wind-cutting Sword Technique, Cang Yang Jin, Pine Wood Sword Technique, Broken Jade Hand, Fierce Sword Technique, Phantom Ninth Layer, Overlord Sword [can be clicked to query], Techniques: Basic Fire Control Technique, Flying Sand and Rocks, Illusion Mind Technique [can be clicked to query], Talent entries: Luck adds to the body (red), immortal body (red), imperial transformation (red), memorizes all magic with one glance (gold), intersection of yin and yang (red), follows like a shadow (red), warlock's funds (red), tracking thousands of miles (gold), Elegance and peace (purple), perception of all things (purple), multitasking (purple), alchemy talent (gold), body of gathering spirits (gold), gathering breath (purple), meditation (purple), illusion (purple), blood inducing (purple), Vajra Prajna (gold), ghost bone and fire (gold), flying dragon exploring clouds (purple), sliding door locks (blue), water spirit body (gold), " "The Body of Gathering Spirits (Gold): Born with a strong physique, it can accommodate auras of any attribute! "

Summary: Not good-looking

It's actually okay, but it's just a bad ending. Although it ends, it's a bit forced and leaves a lot of holes unfilled.

The logic is confusing and unfinished.

I met the emperor in a few chapters. Hundreds of households who don't know the token head can run their own families.

This kind of golden finger, there are so many countries in this book, just start a war with Guigu Zongheng and become a god in one battle. You also need to stay in the court and do some worldly things.

The realm is vague, but the rest is fine. The realm can be divided into nine levels or the beginning, middle, end, and perfection. This book will be much better! The realm is blurry, and it's uncomfortable to watch. In order not to make me uncomfortable, I can only make the author uncomfortable! 😄

This is the book with the most typos I have ever read, bar none!!! The writing is not very good but it is still readable. There are a lot of typos, which really affects the perception.

The first few chapters were okay, but not until the beginning of the Empress. The martial arts novel turned into a harem novel, and if it was mixed in, it would be miles away from the topic!