A Fantasy World: From the Start, I Awakened the Devouring Talent

It's a big departure. Other novels are about finding parents, lovers, and other things. This novel is about finding gay friends. The relationship between gay friends is inexplicable. I don't know why it is so important? ? ? The male protagonist of this novel is very much like a heroine. He is also a holy mother. He can forgive others even though he has killed others. He has found a gay friend for half of the plot. It is really extremely poisonous and inexplicable. You can write a female channel novel. He is unmoved by other heroines and often avoids feelings. He also wants to help others for no reason and wants to escape from this relationship. Don't write a male protagonist. Just write a heroine. It would be better if you go to a female channel to write. Male channels may not be suitable for you🙃

It's okay. It's just a little rushed at the end

The plot is okay, but there is a lot of nonsense, and the promotion is sometimes faster and sometimes slower.

The whole book is so long-winded that it was written entirely to make up for the word count. I couldn't finish the three chapters that could be solved with a few words. I couldn't finish the three chapters that were flipped over and over again, and the fight that was finished with just a few moves. It took four chapters to finish! You can see how much verbosity goes into this!

9.3 Rating? Is this hydrology 9.3? How many brushes are there? ! I insisted on seeing the counter-attack in Chapter 27... I was really sick of it! ! After vomiting, let me talk about my impressions. First of all: That is real water. Even calling it a running account is a shame! ! Second: If you don't know the meaning of basic common sense words, you just use them randomly. ... Fair-minded...

Well written

Your articles are always written by E-E-E, I told you, E-E will go to eat and put this aside

It's not good-looking at all. The protagonist is a fool. When the protagonist saw the emperor, he was so scared that he almost died. The emperor asked him what exercises he practiced, so he gave them to the emperor.

Author, I don't even know what to say about you. You insist on using four or five chapters to write a plain farewell, and you also have a young lady come out to make trouble. Isn't it disgusting? Who can read such a clumsy and procrastinating article? If you write down the exciting parts carefully, no one will criticize you. Can you just brush off some bland flirting stuff? You can't even grasp the rhythm, so that's all you can do.

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I found that the author's chapters have enough words but too much nonsense. The plot seems smooth but feels immature. It lacks depth, connotation, human feelings and sophistication. Baishui's writing is boring! Just barely pass!