Harry Potter: A Vampire Villain? Call Me The Chosen One

The premise of this book is quite good. It's just that the plot is too chaotic. The point of view is completely confusing. The meaning is unclear, and there are tons of typos. The perspective also keeps shifting.

The constantly changing perspectives are so annoying; I initially thought the plot was alright.

The personas are absolutely chaotic! 995!!! I clicked in to check out this topic, but ahh ...

I don't understand. Why use a perspective in writing?

The sentences are incoherent, riddled with typos, and impossible to read.

My writing is terrible; there are so many typos, and some sentences don't make sense. I don't understand what it's trying to say.

After reading it for a long time, I realized I couldn't understand it at all; it was really messy.

I suggest you re-translate it.

... It gives me the feeling that Rowling's copyright is being threatened.

Seriously, the pronouns are very confusing; you have to look very carefully to understand them, and sometimes you can't understand them at all. It's quite frustrating.