Douluo V: Natural Disaster of the Undead, Tricking Wang Donger into Killing Tang San

In the Douluo 2 fanfic, the protagonist Dai Tianming has a good relationship with Huo Yuhao. He first enters the Star Forest to solve the problem of martial souls: Electrolux - the Holy Law God of the Undead and the Undead Natural Disaster. Huo Guo only has Tianmeng Iceworm, joins Shrek Academy, and the heroine Wang Dong'er. I won't go into details. Let's just read the book to understand.

A fan of Douluo II, the plot is very exciting, there is no system, and there is no intelligence. Goldfinger is Electrolux. Unique setting, there is still a lot of room for the feeling of human body becoming undead. I am looking forward to how the protagonist will fight against the world of gods.

This is the first time I have seen someone write about Douluo V2. The plot and starting point are good, but the writing is too hasty and many things are skipped over, and some are not explained clearly. (Personally, I prefer Loli Xiao Xiao to Wang Dong'er. She has twin martial arts souls, which are controllable and attackable, and she can stop Xiao Xiao to play the flute when she's bored.)

A soul emperor can't kill a soul master, forget it, and he was stewed by a soul master in his mouth, and he said it was confusing, Dai Tianming is not dead, this book has no essence, and it cannot be read. An evil soul master is an evil soul master, even if you change the leather armor, he will always be an evil soul master. If an academy recruits an evil soul master, why can't it recruit other evil soul masters? Professional discrimination!

When we arrived at the Noumenon Sect, it was a scene of large-scale character collapse. If anyone didn't like it, he would kill it directly. A 20-year-old, 70-year-old Soul Saint Long Aotian, who was one of heaven and man, directly became a jealous and lustful villain in the hands of the author. The more disgusting the author wrote about others, the more disgusting I think the author was. He said that I would bear whatever punishment the sect master had, and then said that the punishment was too great, so he ran away and made people laugh to death and wanted to kill you. Can you really run away? Straight sauce novel

Xiao Mo is back with a new book, everyone's support is welcome! Author trumpet!

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It is expected that Qimao will return to publish a new book in August. Will you support it? You can discuss together what themes you like.

The plot of this book is good and fascinating, but the length is too short, the pace is too fast, the description is insufficient, the writing style is poor, and there are many typos, which affects the perception. However, as a refreshing article, it can be said to be successful. After all, the plot is complete and the "shuang" is successfully expressed ( I am seriously commenting, I hope the author can see it, and the future works will be more exciting) No matter what kind of person San Shao is, or what kind of garbage Tang San is, San Shao's literary talent is indeed very good, and the author can also learn from San Shao's writing style while being a fan

It feels much better than other fanfics, and it has a single female protagonist.