Quick Transmigration: The Life-Rewriting System

It can be seen that the author was not very old when he wrote this book. First of all, if you are not very old yourself, there is no need to describe the heroine in your novel as an adult, because your own knowledge, writing style and writing style are not enough to support the character of an adult like the heroine. She is already an adult and is still a primary school teacher. After entering the mission world, she was praised by people in the small world with just a few words. Her father was worried to death in the real world. After being praised a few times by people in the mission world, she almost forgot his purpose of coming to this mission world and lived leisurely. And your writing style is like a running account, with no focus or focus at all. You haven't made it clear what his purpose in this world is. The content of the article is different from that of an old lady's foot binding. It fails to get to the point. Your opening topic is seriously inconsistent with the description of your article, and it goes off topic at the beginning. If you don't have time to go to Baidu to search for national flag speeches, you might as well go to Baidu to search for what an orphan is and what is the definition of an orphan? She has an elder sister and a younger sister. Her immediate family members and grandmother are all still alive. What kind of orphan is this? Tell me?

It should be given a neutral rating. Articles are like running accounts. The heroine has accomplished so much. Too much unreal

Author, I hope you write like the previous one. If you write like this, you will easily become angry.

It's pretty average. I couldn't get enough of it when I looked at it. I skipped through it.

I feel dizzy after seeing so many typos.

Old lady's foot-binding. . . The plot is relatively boring. The first small world is almost a hundred chapters long, all of which are just a running account of embarrassing the heroine. There is no story and no interest...

I decided to abandon the first part before I finished it. When I read it, I felt that the author was still a student. I gave it five stars for encouragement. But in fact, the writing style is immature, the imagination is unreasonable, and the logic is not smooth. For an old bookworm like me, it is really uninteresting. And what can I say? Does it mean that an ordinary person who travels through time can have an IQ of 180 and kill all living beings instantly? Success is so easy!

There are too many words for water!

For me, who listens to books, I can explain it clearly in a long way.

A bit wordy and too greasy. Got to 85.