The Immortal Realm General Store

The heroine can help the enemy who destroyed her spiritual roots, haha! The heroine is a general from the interstellar world! What about decisive killing?

Anyone who can be a general must have brains. Looking at this whole thing, I feel like a weak white lotus female college student in time travel...

There are a lot of poisonous points, and the heroine is too holy.

It was really good at the beginning, but it got stuck later on. It took me a long time to write a small thing, and I didn't pay attention to the details in this way. The more I wrote, the uglier it became. The writing became more and more lazy, and the heroine became more and more stupid. After reading the second part, it was simply a trick of wisdom. No wonder I couldn't help but get angry.

I think it's off topic. It was written as a story about opening a store, but later it all turned into a story about a strong female cultivating immortal and counterattacking. It's not very good.

The heroine is very mentally retarded, and this book is at the level of an elementary school student! Abandon books

I can only say that the heroine is not as good as a general at all. It's like the heroine has been given an identity that doesn't suit her. It feels very childish and contains a lot of nonsense. It's not very attractive, and it's still a bit bad. But I still like the interaction with Yun Ling.

There are too many flaws, and the more you look at it, the more uncomfortable it becomes. I thought it was a shop article, but in the end, the heroine has lost her memory😅😅😅

This is a person who lived to be over a hundred years old in his previous life. He is so naive that he has died and given up.

Yun seems to have not seen the child adopter raised by the heroine. Is he the real child adopter?