After Giving Up My Fortuitous Opportunity, I Became the Cultivation World’s Beloved

The heroine is really stupid, and she is also very holy. Such a rotten family, such a garbage enemy, she just won't solve it.

I'm really speechless. The heroine signed a life-and-death contract with her master Pu Fan (the hero). As for the emotional line, it didn't develop until the end... The heroine accepted a disciple, and at least half of the apprentices fell in love with the heroine. What the hell is this? The apprentice who was raised since he was five or six years old actually falls in love with the heroine... I feel that my three views are incorrect. Just because the heroine's appearance remains unchanged after practicing, the child's Oedipus plot cannot be written as love. The article also spelled out the wrong name and wrong grade many times, which made me stunned for a moment, thinking it was a change of set. On the front of the Central Magic Continent, it says that you need to become a god to open the passage, but it turns out that you can go there by boat from the Holy Magister. So many brothers and sisters went by boat together, but they were separated because of the shipwreck. I mentioned it at the end of the article, otherwise I would have thought that they were all in different dimensions and they would not have reunited. I feel that the central magical continent that the heroine visited is not real, it should be the western magical continent. The master of the heroine, Pu Fan, has become a god (or other gods) and has not cared about the problems of the Central Magic Continent for thousands of years. Why should the heroine take care of it? He was forced by the law of heaven and finally gained the power of faith to become a god... Why do other gods do not need the power of faith, such as elves and dwarves...

Generally speaking, it's okay. The content is okay. There are typos and names that are confusing, but I can understand it. I'll make do with it. Mainly because I haven't read a magic novel in a long time. I feel nostalgic after reading it. I personally like the heroine's character. Overall, it's okay. It's okay╮(¯▽¯)╭

The beginning of this book is very uncomfortable. The heroine is very tolerant, but the middle and later stages are better. However, there are many holes that have not been filled in. For example, the main family of the Tang family and others are not well described. The minor characters around the heroine are not well described. After arriving in the Magic Continent, they are not described at all. Then the ending is very sloppy. It feels that the story is not completely written. The story after he becomes a god is not at all, which is very unpleasant. However, the plot line in the middle and later stages is still relatively complete. The above are just my own opinions. Please don't criticize me.

It's beautiful, but that's the end! I just saw the master

I feel like a lot of things are not explained clearly, and the ending is also very sloppy.

Written,,,, makes people speechless

Persuasion to quit: garbled writing and illogical sentences

Kindness comes from the heart! Don't be cowardly, don't act, don't make trouble. Lively and vivid characters!

Not bad, pretty good, but the ending depends on the follow-up. Recommended