Siheyuan: a Desperate Family? Trick You to Death!

This book is not bad from a systematic point of view. After all, it has a system. When reading it, you cannot compare it with the plot of "The Quadrangle", but the character creation is too single and rigid. In the era when having breasts is a mother, the character's psychology is often two-sided. The internal side is for the family, which is also the most real, and the external side changes with the change of the other person's identity, status, and wealth. Of course, it is only appropriate to use simple psychological descriptions like Shazhu, Teacher Ran and Jia Zhang in the article. In general, the material selection is good and the plot structure is good, but the character creation is not considered well. Different psychological descriptions and comparisons should be used to highlight the character, rather than a single one. There are also a lot of typos. Of course, this is an unavoidable mistake, but I still hope that I can work harder and write less typos. It really affects the reading experience. It took me five or six chapters to realize that the "Jungle" is "Uncle"

Workers complain that the braised pork in the cafeteria is only fat and not lean? Do you know that in those days, people liked to be fat? Fat ones are more expensive than thin ones, because everyone has no fat in their stomachs!

Let's talk about the chaotic times first. You still used tickets at that time to open a restaurant? Since it's okay to open a restaurant, how can you use the Lou family's identity to make an argument? Let's talk about the typos. It's very hard to read and I have to guess. I don't know how I got this score.

After the two hundred and twenty chapters, you should find someone to write it for you! Didn't Jia Zhang and Bang Gang get replaced earlier? They were both sentenced to two months, but why did they turn around and start making trouble with everyone? Moreover, the protagonist's temperament also changed drastically. Others teased women and even hit them first. The protagonist took the opportunity to retaliate and injured the other person. After being extorted money, the protagonist actually compromised directly. Not only did he agree to find a job for him, he also gave him five yuan, and in the end he even invited the whole hospital to dinner. My brain was squeezed by the door. I used to be able to extort money from others without any problem, but now I'm fine. It's obvious that the other party broke the law, but the protagonist turned out to be cowardly. Don't tell me that this is written by the same author. His temperament has changed a lot! I am also an old bookworm. In recent years, I have felt that I have not read many good books. I can barely read some if I lower my requirements. If a certain plot in a novel is unreasonable or logically contradictory, I can barely accept it, but if it's a big deal, just skip it. The most unbearable thing is that the protagonist suddenly changes his temperament without any warning. That would be really boring! For example, if a protagonist never suffers any loss when he stirs up troubles, but suddenly turns into a coward, and is blackmailed and still accepts it, then who can continue to watch it! I saw Chapter 221 and gave up!

Is this the end of the mess?

A Siheyuan is such a simple plot. It's hard to write a book like this. I can't even imagine what it would be like if I were to write a fantasy book~

The front and back are seriously inconsistent! The plot is seriously inconsistent with the era! It's purely a fantasy, this book should be titled "Dream Pen Bullshit"

I have seen about two hundred pieces of background information. There is no background information. The saying that business started in the late 1980s is all speculative. The plot is too slow to write and drags the Jia family's various works. The story of "Love in the Siheyuan" is about surviving in the torrent of the times, family matters, and intrigues. Your pure main plot is that the Jia family jumps out to suppress the wave, and there is no opportunity or performance for other people to appear. I can't eat this shit. Whoever wants to watch it will watch it.

Damn, you've already come to your door and stolen several kilograms of bacon. Why don't you send him to the police station to show off your authority? What's the use of a favor from a policeman who doesn't dare to mess with an old deaf lady?

It's so rubbish. The main character is like rubbish. He has been wronged all the time. Handle it with care.