Konoha: No One Knows I Can Escape!

Forget everything else, Xiao Du can still bear it. I really can't stand it when I see Namikaze Minato flying thunder god before he graduates from the ninja school. There is no logic. How can you think of it? A kid who hasn't graduated has learned to fly thunder god. I really don't want to complain.

I originally thought it was a time travel story, but I didn't expect it to be a story about reincarnation, eradicating the reincarnation of Indra and Asura. This is the reincarnation of Senju Hashirama (I don't know whether it is Asura or Indra). It's so strange to write, I'll go.

There was so much preparation in the early and middle stages, and then the Sage of Six Paths appeared all of a sudden, and then the protagonist sealed Madara. It was anticlimactic, and it was obvious that the author didn't want to write it at all.

The timeline is confusing, and the obvious one is the time of death of Pain. The title of Sannin was obtained by Hanzo during the fight, but Pain died before the fight. Secondly, the emotional line is confusing. There are so many emotional scenes in the early stage, but they are completely gone in the middle stage. Finally, what is the use of the wooden escape of the protagonist? With the wooden escape, if you don't practice physical skills, the physical skills can only increase chakra in the early stage. In the later stage, which ninjutsu type ninja still relies on physical skills to cultivate chakra? He can reach Hashirama by relying on physical skills.

It's very baffling🤔I see, the writing was okay at the beginning, but it was bland and the pace was too slow, and then it suddenly became sudden? (๑•̌.•̑๑)ˀ̣ˀ̣ Doesn't look good,

He always writes about all kinds of weird psychological activities, and it's so short and illogical. I don't even know why this book has an 8.3

Just one sentence: Not cool enough😇😇

A complete mess

The first chapter exploded. Author, do you want to read what you are writing?

It's a bit disgusting to watch and I really can't stand it any longer. Why do you have to hide your wood escape skills at this stage? Mito is not dead yet. Has the author watched Naruto?