Huangquan Yinsi

The writing is really good, but the pace is a bit fast in the later stages. What I feel is a bit lacking is that the Five Ghost Brothers had already left when they fought against Jiuying, but they left again in the last chapter, which is a bit contradictory. Otherwise, it is really good. I hope the author can write better works.

The bad guy, the dog-like protagonist, it's really hard for the author to write such a disgusting person,

It's a bit outrageous. Sometimes the characters change a lot. For example, in one section, Xiao Tian suddenly turned into a black man, and Bao Jiaxian, who was originally a yellow skin, suddenly turned into a white fox. Also, sometimes the male protagonist's fighting power is very low. He even defeated Zhu Jiuyin and couldn't defeat a wild beast. The most outrageous thing was the five ghosts. I remember that they had been stunned once before, and the penultimate one suddenly appeared again, and then they were lost again.

What kind of author? Can you write such a good novel?

Others don't know, but for me the plot is a bit draggy. As soon as I saw an article that I thought was procrastinating, I was not interested. What could have been mentioned in one sentence was written into several natural paragraphs! And I found that 60% of the protagonists in the early stage of supernatural books did not have a high IQ...

Really good`

I can't understand, I'm speechless, what is it written about, the main character is basically useless, his IQ is not online, didn't he study such an awesome book? Still don't understand what kind of poison it is

Even though they knew what kind of person that little fat guy was, they still managed to get together. It was just like birds of a feather flock together.

He is a piece of shit, just like a middle-aged boy, he has no temper at all, he is a coward who can save his enemy and still feel good about himself🤮🤡🤮🤡

It's ugly, it's all words