I Was Deceived into Becoming a Peerless Immortal Cultivator

I have read several chapters of this book, so I have three questions: First, what is very puzzling about this book is why many great cultivators cannot see the cultivation level of the protagonist group in the early stage? Is there no divine consciousness in the world of immortality? Just seeing the great road... Author, the reason why geniuses are called geniuses is because they made achievements in the later period, and later generations awarded them posthumous titles! And why those realm differences are useless? I never figured this out when I was reading. Since it is of no use, can I delete it? Would it be better to write directly in terms of Dao insights or strengths and weaknesses? For example, Dao Realm 1, 2, 3... And then write about the differences and wonders of each realm. The author should at least write down the differences, otherwise the male protagonist would just jump through more than a dozen levels casually, and I wouldn't feel involved (┯_┯) Second, this kind of subject matter is inherently difficult to control. If the male protagonist and the protagonist group are very powerful, the title of the book will be useless. It is better to change it to (Becoming a master of cultivating immortals starts from being fooled), and the author does not consider rationality. The author can read other books and see how others write reasonable (dihua), such as (Being mistaken for a master at the beginning of the escape game) to exercise logic. Third, and this is the most important point, the male protagonist travels through time! Was the male protagonist in the mountains before he traveled through time? Why don't you know anything, and you missed out on the nine-year compulsory education? I laughed. The author keeps working hard. I still like this kind of subject matter. The above is my opinion. If readers think it is wrong, you can comment and I will delete it. Don't leave it privately. Thank youヽ(≧Д≦)ノ

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In the early stage, the skill of cheating and pretending is okay, but in the later stage, it is a bit insulting to the IQ. This book is a novel about cultivating immortality. After reading the whole book, the protagonist actually didn't kill anyone, not even a chicken. How can one cultivate immortality without a little bit of blood? Even Buddhists would not dare to write like this. As for the ending, I'm even more speechless. It's said that all the eunuchs have read it.

First of all, the author has no concept of time travel, and the realm in the novel is unclear. Secondly, time travel novels all have a fixed time point, and the author ignores the protagonist's level from the beginning. Furthermore, the year before the time travel was not mentioned, and there is no realm division in the novel. Many problems are related to the agility of the characters. Although the imagination is wide open, it lacks a main system. I hope the author will continue to work hard! Look at other people's writing methods

There are some typos, and the ending is a bit rushed. The follow-up should be more exciting! The fool's mother opened the door for the fool's father! It's funny, you were watching it so wonderfully that you suddenly stopped! Positive text! How much courage does it take to creatively travel through time to cultivate immortality, and to commit suicide in order to cultivate the power of the lunar calendar! The male protagonist in the article is a modern maniac, so he can simply cash in on it.

This book has a good beginning and middle, and even uses a blank space at the end, leaving readers with unlimited room for imagination and making the article more diverse. 🙃