Weird World of Immortality

In fact, I originally wanted to write an "average" one, but the author's words after the completion made me want to give this work an "excellent" one. I couldn't attract the charm of the character💋💋 Talking about the work alone, the writing style is average. Of course, this is generally very strong for many male-video novels. The first half of the plot is impeccable, but the second half is obviously poor. This is why I want to give it a neutral rating. However, I also made it clear in my words. There is no way for each individual, no matter how strong he is, he can only live alone in the times. I have always disliked the kind of cultivating immortality by dragging one's family with oneself. It's very troublesome. The author always inevitably adds a lot of cheats to his family. Fortunately, in this book, at least my parents didn't go to cultivate immortality 😂 I actually don't like the character of the male protagonist very much, especially the plot where he communicates with the guide many times makes me very uncomfortable and very "villain". I forgot the specific plot, but this feeling is indeed very obvious. It may be the author's design to flesh out the characters, but if you don't like it, you don't like it hahahaha There is also the end of the story. Of course, there is no problem with the author's plot design, but the be aesthetics are also pretty good, and there is no need to be perfect. No one can go back, time is changing, people are changing with the passage of time, and following the trend is the essence of change. In the era of great changes, big waves wash over the sand, and you have to do whatever it takes to survive, and you have to stick to the bottom line because of your conscience. This is the highlight of this book.

As a fantasy novel, the author's writing style is okay, the sentences are fluent, and the descriptions are in place. However, the character of the host is not pleasing to the eye. The protagonist can be suspicious, but it is a test of the author's writing skills. He must achieve a balance between plot and detailed description. There is a problem with the author's handling here, and the plot is somewhat advanced. It's "sluggish". It's not that the plot arrangement is slow, but that it's forced to spend a lot of time describing the protagonist's suspicion. It will be a bit dull to read, but overall it is still okay. If the author can consider streamlining the details and reflecting the protagonist's personality from some small aspects, rather than describing it in large paragraphs, it would still be good.

The main character is just like a mentally retarded person. He is a detective who traveled through time, as if he has no brains. The supporting characters are also written in such a stupid way. The only thing that stands out is the fishing upgrade. The fishing upgrade happens to be used by himself. Although I have to explain it forcefully, it doesn't make much sense. It is almost the same as a system article. If you change the skin, it will be a system article. It's disgusting.

One thing I think is too poisonous is that Xiaoqun, a ghost controlled by the protagonist. She is not willing to use a clone to explore the way. The protagonist also has to use coercion and inducement. It is simply poisonous to death.

When an ordinary person faces extraordinary power, how can you come up with so many dramas? The process of talking to Wu is too dramatic. Even if someone wants to harm you or kill you, you are just an ordinary person now, how can you resist or what? Where do all these dramas come from?

In the past, I felt that there were many problems with the logic of plot advancement. After reading several similar novels, I realized that the plot progression logic of this one is pretty good among this type of novels.

It started out as a good book, but it turned out that Xiaoliu, a good-for-nothing girl, stalked the male protagonist, and the male protagonist refused decisively. He was speechless, procrastinated, and ran away decisively. It was so rubbish. This woman is just a shameless and ordinary kind of woman.

The dragon head, the middle rib, the rear snake tail,

The protagonist has a book introducing low-level monsters, why not read it? You have to ask others whether the level of this book is too high or the things the protagonist encounters are too low. If not, don't add such things. It will make people's heads go numb.

What a mess of a novel! Abandon books