Yuhun: My Soulmate Is the Sickly Valkyrie

I went to read the negative reviews. I also wanted to leave a negative review, but I couldn't bear to let the author lose his income, so I said so in the positive review. First of all, the plot was confusing. It was particularly confusing. There was so much foreshadowing. We were about to get involved with the Phoenix Guild Leader, but it turned out to be a backhand. Then we got involved with the law enforcement team who had no foreshadowing. Then there is what everyone calls the selling of dog meat. Indeed, I think if you want to write about a yandere, just write about it, but what does the whole harem mean? I thought it was pure love, but in the end I opened a harem, so just write a harem novel. The women you wrote are all so scheming. It's not scheming, but the male protagonist you wrote is too suspicious, and his brain is not fully developed. Since they are so powerful, wouldn't it be great to open a harem in Yuzhou, investigate the other two experimental subjects, then accept it, and lead Phoenix to win the World Cup? Also, it was mentioned earlier that you can contract one more every time you level up. I have been reading this for so long and this thing is not mentioned at all, so what is the point of foreshadowing it? The last thing is the characters, which is the most important thing. Even if your novel is not very well written, the characters are well prepared and each character is vividly written, which is also interesting. However, you have not talked about the foreshadowing for a long time, and you have done it without foreshadowing. Moreover, the character creation is not good at all, and the personality is not outstanding. In fact, I don't think girls have much of a problem. The main problem is the male protagonist you wrote. I don't think you have the brains to know this male protagonist. Finally, I hope the author will read the novel you wrote. You should feel awkward yourself.

I really feel like I can't stand it anymore. It's not anything else. It's the same sentence. Either you don't have to bring your brains up and you just don't accept life and death, or you just keep developing slowly. You want to show off and don't want to expose your S-level skills. Write them down and go back to experiment. And you only had so little soul power at the time. If you want to pretend to compare, just tell the teacher that the 6-star one is in your hands.

I hate that iron cannot become steel. The author plays his cards badly. The system's presence is even lower, and is only mentioned in the first one or two chapters. Paving the way is the same as not paving the way!

Come on

Everything else is okay, but what is this description of the protagonist? It's written in a mess. I didn't believe those comments at first, but after reading them, I believe them. I want to hide them, and I want to pretend to be 13. What the hell🤬

Nice writing, don't write it next time

Very nice👀🐂🍺

The article is not on topic There is a yandere in the name, but yandere rarely appears in emotional scenes, and there are no core yandere stories (imprisonment, forced love, etc.) Under the guise of being a yandere, I write useless articles. I have only read more than 100 chapters, but there are already more than 100 chapters. There is nothing I want to read yet, and I don't plan to continue reading. Could you please give the author a better name?

This book is officially finished here. Thank you for your support. Welcome to read other novels on Qimao. See you in the next book~

I just don't want to make the author sad.