Multiverse: Transforming into a Valkyrie from the Start

Come on

After only a short amount of reading, the characters appeared to be in a confusing position and the logic was inconsistent. It can be seen that I wanted to write it in a Japanese style of comedy, but I used too much force and it was a forced comedy. The inner drama of the protagonist was too useless. I wanted to make it a misunderstanding-type comedy, but I kept saying that this and that person was crazy, crazy... I used too much force... It would have been better without these inner dramas. The combat power system is lousy, the angel's wings are superimposed five times... I thought it was the kind of ability that is superimposed 5 times. The protagonist can skip level 45 to level 55 and above... It turns out that this is the superposition of level 45✖️5=225? Is that how it's calculated?! But the full level is 120! Even if there is the concept of extreme levels (beyond level 120), it still crashes! That is to say, a level 120 mage can be defeated by 120 level 1 mages combined! The end of the complaint ~ extremely poisonous ~ As of now, when I saw Kurumi... I didn't dare to watch it anymore... Because there was a big problem with the portrayal of the main character alone, I didn't dare to watch it. (If I forget to read it again in the future, I will remind you why I didn't read it.)

Well enough. It's just that the plot isn't great. Overall, quite satisfactory

Overall, I think the plot of this novel is still very good, but the author's writing style may still need to be strengthened a little bit. In addition, I feel that the ending is a bit too rushed, and there are still some holes that have not been filled. I hope the author can publish a better book next time.

It's so confusing, people are confused when watching it

Good