Global Beast Taming: Awakening a Nine-Star Talent from the Start

It looks good, but there are too many typos. The protagonist Su Ming has a system by his side, but people always have to have experiences, and everyone's experience is different. Each has its own strengths and weaknesses.

Is the author still alive? Stop updating for so long

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The system is not very useful. It is not like other systems where the air is released every second. However, it becomes a bit boring later.

The preface does not match the postscript, the plot is very confusing, there are many typos, and the plot is too weak to stand up to the test.

Although the writing was mediocre at first, it was still passionate. Later, after changing authors, the writing became worse and worse. Even the most basic beast control, skills, items, and even the age of the protagonist would be forgotten or misremembered. This kind of author who has no writing style and is extremely irresponsible to the work and readers writes randomly... I don't want to talk about it anymore, abandon the book.

It's pretty good to watch, the plot is pretty good, and the writing is good, but there are a lot of typos. You can take a look and enjoy the pictures. But, everyone has their own experience, but the existence of the system makes the protagonist's experience very smooth. This makes the protagonist look stupid. To be honest, some of the plots felt forced. For example, when the protagonist and the heroine met for the first time, they couldn't continue chatting, but how many times did they like each other? (If they liked each other as soon as they met, why couldn't they stop talking) (This plot is a bit stiff, and more importantly, the plot of their meeting is less written, and there is no foreshadowing) Of course, everything else written is pretty good.

The pace of this book is good, the only regret is that it didn't end well.

There are some places that are obviously from this sect, but suddenly become from another sect.

Halfway through the movie, there was no description of the battle at all. It was basically just a quick glance. I don't know what to read?