The Super Divine Pet Evolution System

Personally, I feel a little confused. I hope the author can make a draft and make an outline first. Many places are unreasonable. For example, when the Sky-Splitting Demon Tiger didn't evolve, didn't it say that he was with Su Yun's parents? The last two were suddenly summoned again, and when the ant turned into a human form, did I mean to leave Xiao Qing in that village? Later, they were summoned and their names were also clear. Su Yun and Su Yu were often wrong, which made me a little confused🌚🌚🌚

The protagonist went into seclusion for three years. When he came back, his wife was pregnant. Do you think the child was his?

I absolutely support you, but can you correct the typos a little bit?

Personally, I feel that although the writing of this book is not very good, what about the protagonist? In my opinion, it is a bit too holy. Someone rushes into your home to kill your parents. The protagonist defeats others and then lets them go. I don't understand this. The reason why I can follow it is because of the setting.

I still like this novel very much, and the update speed is also OK. I have read more than 1,000 pieces so far. The first part made me excited, but the second part felt a bit watery. I hope the author will not try to make up the word count just to perfunctory us. However, I will always support you and hope that your later works will become more and more exciting!!!

It's a pretty good theme of controlling beasts and systems, but the author's writing is not good, there are many typos, and the plot description is not very good. It's okay to read at the beginning, but the plot is very repetitive in the back, which makes people irritated. However, novices who want to read about beast control can consider reading it.

Very exciting

Lu Fei? (Luffy)!? Aunt~ I seem to have discovered something extraordinary.

In fact, there is a lot that can be said about this book in detail, but to put it in a few words, it is: it is full of water, many words are added unnecessary, so many words can be said, at least 100,000 words are nonsense. So, it's okay to read it, but you might not be too interested (you can incorporate it into the book)

Are all hot chicks saints?