The Mortal Disciple

Your article is not decorated with gorgeous language, but it touches readers with plain and true feelings. The sentences are smooth and coherent. The psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the selection of materials is very novel, the angle is clearly visible, the language is plain yet elegant, and concise It is rich in meaning and can be called a model article! This article shows extraordinary literary skills despite its plainness. It can be said that every word is precious and every sentence is a classic. It has reached a height that is elusive for us. From an artistic point of view, this article still needs to be improved, but its significance is far greater than the success itself. Also, the use of punctuation marks is even more appropriate. After reading your article word for word, my heart couldn't calm down for a long time! How could there be such a penetrating article in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. You made me deeply understand the saying "There are people outside the world, there is a sky outside the world". After reading the article, I dare not reply easily. I am worried that my vulgar language will tarnish this rare article in the world. But I still replied, because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints behind such a wonderful article, it would be a lifelong regret for me. Please forgive my selfishness! No matter how gorgeous the words are, I can't describe the brilliance of this article, so I just want to say: "Your article is so touching! How about... A few more chapters?"

I don't understand why one person in the comments keeps talking about this book, but I think this book is very real. As for some people saying that the author uses a trumpet, don't say it doesn't, so what if it does? Who doesn't want to be good? Who doesn't want to earn more? To be honest, it's not easy to write something. If you like it, just read it. If you don't like it, don't hurt me. Author, just do what you wish and don't ask about the future. Come on, write, don't worry about Xiaoxiao.

What the hell are you writing! Extremely poisonous! It's like having something in your brain! Also, if you want to improve the word count, put your nonsense at the end. What do you mean by putting it at the front? ? ? ?

What kind of rubbish protagonist is he? He must be sick. A monk who has practiced Qi at the first level has to swallow his anger even if he is humiliated by people in the world. There is no sense of right and wrong at all. The white snake who protected the village was killed by the villains, even though he could have been saved. He's so stupid that he's not the protagonist, the protagonist is nothing.

Not bad!

When I saw Chapter 18, I felt that the protagonist was both stupid and stupid, with no potential for development, and he was out of touch.

This protagonist, people want to kill him, but he still thinks not to implicate innocent people. His IQ really has no lower limit.

Deep skills can be seen in the ordinary!

The writing style of Yiguang's works is first-rate

Pig's feet are like a fool, no different from a mentally retarded person, and I can't stand the ending of Bai Zhi in the chapter about obsession.