No Immortals

I have read too many fairy tale novels. To be honest, I have rarely seen good works since I read Tiancan Tudou's Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, Fighting to Break the Sky, and Fighting to Conquer the World. Either the plot is confusing, inconsistent, and there are a lot of typos, or it is a long-winded combination of words, or even plagiarism of other people's works, and what's more, the protagonist's name is not even changed. As for the style of the work, more than 80% are imitated from several works of Tiancan Tudou. But this Wu Xian really surprised me! Although I've only read Chapter 550, I haven't seen the rest of it, so I can't comment. But for the first five hundred and fifty chapters, the plot design is novel, the structure is rigorous, the writing is beautiful, and there are very few typos! The most important thing is that the work is extremely philosophical, with a delicate description of the character's image, heart, and personality. It vividly reflects the reality and cruelty of the world of mortals and cultivators, and it also portrays the warmth and warmth of human emotions penetratingly. It is not so much a fairy tale, but a real society. It can be seen that the author really writes carefully, and it can also be seen that the author has a profound literary background. It can also be seen that the author is actively and diligently pursuing perfection in everything! Excellent work, excellent work! If it could be reproduced more carefully, it would be as good as a masterpiece!

My first review was after reading the book "Wuxian". I felt that the concept was novel, the description of human nature was very detailed, and the storyline was ups and downs. It was not the kind of refreshing novel, and it seemed to have a unique flavor. Friends who are not good at reading may wish to read this book. It is worth recommending.

After reading Chapter 51, the more I read, the more I don't want to read it. It's too coward, it's too coward, it's too coward. As a cultivator, I have to bear the wrath of mortals. I still shake my head and smile bitterly. My eyes regain clarity. I'm just a coward. There are so many bells and whistles. I've abandoned the book. I hope the author can work hard and write better and better in the future.

10 Out of 10 points is not an exaggeration. The characters are flesh and blood. Xiu Xian is written like this. The writing style is really good. It is not a piece of writing. Don't worry, old bookworms tell you, it is definitely worth reading!

After reading the trilogy of red-haired old monster Chen Dong, I accidentally found "Wuxian" and finished it in a week. The writing is good, the characters are flesh-and-blood, and reflect another real society. Some chapters made me cry after reading them. This book is not pornographic and can be recommended to children.

Fortunately, this book is true. There are so many adventures of geniuses in other books about cultivating immortals. On the way to cultivating immortals, one accidentally dies and disappears. What's wrong with being a coward? Isn't Han Laomo, the protagonist of Mortal Immortal, also a coward to death? To become an immortal, you must first be a human being. Besides, the protagonist is also a weakling in the early stage. It is normal for parents to be short of affection for their children.

The emotional intelligence of the protagonist is so hilarious that the whole story about the mortal world is filled with hundreds of chapters. At the same time, I don't know what I want to do. I'm hated by everyone everywhere, so I just pretend to be an outsider and act like a carriage driver. I look dead every day, and no one else can say anything about it. He is wanted throughout Daxia, and he hangs a gourd and travels around the world every day, fearing that no one can find him. The most ridiculous thing is that the character that everyone hates is actually the Virgin, trying to save others every day.

This book is very good, but it is a bit too literary and too arrogant. Just imagine, a village man in the mountains doesn't know a few Chinese characters. How can he speak like the ancient people we usually know? The form is strong enough to be classical but fails to convey the meaning, so it is inevitable to draw tigers and dogs (why do you sound like this when you speak...)

The more you watch, the more angry you become. Who wants to reward you? It's better not to reward you.

In terms of writing techniques, this book is well written and the rhetoric is quite good, but some words are used inappropriately, which needs attention. Secondly, the content is too complicated and protracted. The first 20% of the content is too much in the secular world, which is basically derailed from the word "cultivation". The positioning of martial arts is more suitable, rather than "cultivation". Secondly, the protagonist is too timid and fearful! Although his situation made him worried many times, at the same time, he also acted too timid! Especially when Elder Jiang was killed... I was speechless... I haven't read the rest, and I can't stand it anymore. I can see it now only because the writing method is clean and pretty good, but the content is indeed a little off topic. I could write more about the secular world and it is understandable, but it is too much... We are not interested in the protagonist eating and going to the toilet... In addition, the explanation on the timeline is also relatively vague and messy. These are the things the author needs to pay attention to.