Martial Tomb

After reading it, I just went to the outer world to fight and it was over. What's the follow-up? When will the second part come out? Author, don't say you don't have it. It's easy to get beaten to death.

When will the books "Eternal Kingdom", "Lord of the Other Side" and "Master of the Mind" be released?

After reading it, it's not good, the writing is not good. The plot is average. The key is that it seems to be unfinished.

What are you writing about? It's a train, a genetic warrior, and a mecha. I just don't understand how a cheetah's genetically modified warrior can fight against the Great Immortal. The cheetah's genes are so powerful, and they are also practicing knitting. Isn't this the feeling of déjà vu from Star Wars?

After coming out of the ancient times, the plot fell apart. Apart from a fight with pirates and a visit to a market, nothing else was written about Star Trek... The distance unit is also very poor. There are also omissions in the training of Tianzhou, and the training of combat power is not logical... It is written too casually

The writing is messy, with hammers here and there, trains and nuclear bombs, things like the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms, the Magical Art of Wedding Clothes, the Style of a Brainless Warrior, and the use of swords and guns without hiding.

It's a mess, everything is there

This book is too boring, and it's no brainer!

It's a lot of nonsense. I don't know how it got nine points.