Immortal Coffin, Divine Ruins, Unrivaled Sword!

Very well written! It can be seen that the author's level is very high, which is reflected in two aspects. On the one hand, the descriptions of characters are lifelike and the descriptions of scenery are poetic and picturesque. This is actually an essential element of a good novel. On the other hand, there is the righteous human heart. Although the background of the novel is a world where the strong are respected, there are also good and evil. Punishing evil and promoting good, promoting virtue and delivering positive energy are the soul of the novel. The author deserves praise for doing this well!

Author, you wrote the rebirth of a strong man in such an embarrassing way. The male protagonist can cross a level to kill enemies, but a group of enemies who are two or three levels higher than the male protagonist come to torture the male protagonist. The male protagonist can never level up as quickly as he can cause trouble, and has provoked a lot of enemies. Since I watched Rebirth of the City Immortal, and then read the writing by you novice writers, I really can't stand it, people. Jia Luochen can also cross realms to kill enemies, but he can also rely on tricks to trap enemies whose realms are much higher than his. He has never been beaten to death by the enemy's momentum. He has been in such a miserable state. Does Luo Chen really have the thoughts and strategies to be reborn as a strong man? His spiritual state is completely the same as that of the male protagonist you wrote. Is this male protagonist you wrote really the rebirth of a strong man? He is completely reckless and ignorant. I suggest you study the book "Rebirth of the Urban Immortal Lord" written by Luo. Go and learn from it.

For a full score of 10, I would give it 6~7~8. Point 1, the pace of this article can be seen to be very fast. What is the beginning of this book? Arriving directly from the place of birth to the imperial city, the pace is very fast, which is good for some people, but it also lacks some of the proper plots. Of course, this is acceptable. The second point is that the fighting scenes in this article are too protracted, and there are some repetitions in the plot. For example, the protagonist encounters a strong enemy, a beauty, or a clan friend who always likes Chen Feng and Chen Feng's name, which is unpleasant. It doesn't feel like a refreshing article, and it doesn't feel like a main text. Point 3, this The emotional line of a book from Chapter 1 to the current Manchu 624 chapter makes people feel that only the Han Jiangxue at the end counts... It's fine if you don't say it. Everyone understands it anyway, but the emotional line is very strange. But back to this article, I think the good point is that the author has a writing logic, but the logic lacks embellishment, such as mentioned before, which can enrich the process. Then the author's literary talent is okay. What makes me think the best point of this book is? This author can read comments and correct typos, including the interaction in the comment area. I think he is a qualified author. There is a high probability that the author can see the comments I wrote. The above is my overall feeling after reading Chapter 624. There are some others that I won't mention because the word count is limited. I hope this book will get better and better. Oh, yes, one more thing... The update is too slow. Anyway, the above problems can be solved. Damn it, you will be charged for three monthly votes.

The protagonist can clearly understand his grudges and kill decisively without being sloppy at all.

It's pretty good, but I don't really like too many girls. The protagonist still has a lot of dead girls in this life. If there are some male brothers, replace all the beauties with an occasional one. It would be good if the delicate body is replaced by a body or body. This does not give a sense of reality. I feel like I am watching a girl novel.

I really can't hold on any longer, the left one taunted. Another sarcasm. It's disgusting. People in the whole plot can't do anything except sarcasm. They can't see anything but sarcasm. Abandon the book. The writing is so bad.

Whether you can kill or not, how can you pretend to be 13 if you don't have the strength. Everyone knows that if you don't have the strength, just go ahead... And pretend to be a role model.

I don't want to comment anymore... Elementary School Club

The fight scenes are well written and the plot has many climaxes. The author probably wrote it carefully, but few people read it.

The plot is exciting and the writing is brilliant and the sentences are fluent.