Martial Immortality: Starting as Great Li’s Most Notorious Young Master

To be honest, although there are some minor flaws in the early stage, the overall plot and writing are quite good. I can't stand it anymore when I see grandpa taking action to deal with the commander-in-chief! Grandpa's character is a loyal and iron-blooded soldier who hates evil as much as he hates hatred, but his treatment of the treasonous commander-in-chief is too bland. In addition, the reason for the commander-in-chief's rebellion is too far-fetched. It is just to repay a promise. This reason is too far-fetched. Also, Grandpa, the Prime Minister's Mansion, feels that there are too few experts. Except for Grandpa, the Grandmaster, there are too many faults below. I feel that the strongest ones are the eldest sister and the bodyguard who protects the Third Young Master. This setting feels that as long as Grandpa is gone, the Prime Minister's Mansion will be instantly killed. This is unreasonable. Also, the villain was exposed too early and too obviously. He blatantly rebelled when he was not sure that grandpa was not around. This is unjustifiable. Also, the representation of the royal family was too weak, so it was abandoned.

Nice

Ha ha! Frivolous, here I come (at this time, a book friend who became ill with longing imagined)

You have been being plotted and beaten all the time, but if you win, you can't do anything to others, and you still have to worry about others plotting against you again.

To be honest, I was very disappointed with this frivolous book. The protagonist is not as arrogant and evil as Xiang Yun (because Xiang Yun always likes to smile evilly), nor is he like Han Feng who rushes forward bravely, nor does he have the background of Zhao Heng's junior disciple. He is obviously a big man, but he is cautious and cautious. He completely inherits Zhao Heng's Taoism and vest style, and the character realm has no tension at all. No, the family, fighting, and character depictions are very average. It doesn't have the same eye-catching and impressive feeling as the previous three movies. My favorite is martial arts. The innovation and wildness of this movie have gradually faded away in the later movies. The same boring and stuck points have become a bit boring to watch.

A new book is out! When will we take down the eldest sisters?

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I couldn't stand it anymore and gave up. I really want to scold the author, but I forget it. It's not easy to write so many words.

It's pretty well written, and there's not much problem with the logic above.

Ups and downs, fascinating

The protagonist is very good at playing.