The First Immortal of Talisman

I just expressed my own opinions. At first, I read a few pictures and thought they were novel, so I continued reading. Later, the author wrote about the male protagonist, and the fall of every woman who came into contact with the male protagonist. From time to time, one came, which made me give up the idea of ​​​​the novel. Then I slowly wrote, and the world in the eyes of the author slowly emerged. The more I wrote, the more interesting it became, and a concept of the world emerged. In fact, the biggest highlight of this kind of novel is the feeling of being involved. I still hope that the author will continue to write more, and I hope that the author will write better and better.

I still like the storyline and the character of the protagonist. The only and most disgusting thing is the stallion. The stallion is not scary. The scary thing is that it is too disgusting to accept all the women who come into contact with it. Senior Sister Xu liked him a little bit. He disappeared for seven years. Senior Sister Xu married someone else and had children. Later, Senior Sister Xu's children and husband died, and the protagonist even took in Senior Sister Xu. It was a bit disgusting.

The protagonist is so disgusting that I want to vomit. I have never seen a woman frame you and then turn around and marry her. Isn't this despicable? What's more important is that his life is almost gone. Is it disgusting to ask his wife to hate him?

Hoho, first again. Sofa

When I saw the third chapter, I didn't want to read it. The ancestor had no grudge against others and went to the murderer's house, but was killed instead. He actually had the nerve to ask the protagonist to avenge him and kill everyone, so he just stopped watching it.

I love this book so much, but the updates are too slow

I feel that the storyline is pretty good, although there are some small links that have some loopholes, so I can't help but make up for it with my own brain. My suggestion is to make the fighting part a little simpler. I've written too much and it's a bit ink. Overall, it's a good review. Keep up the good work.

This harem is really npc

This book is actually said to be good-looking. Three people fight against one who is higher in cultivation than themselves. They fight one by one. What a talent. I can't stand it anymore.

Author, there is an error in this chapter. Chapter 1,127 later became 1,228 😂😂😂