Do Not Disturb Strangers

Taking a calm look at the supernatural theme of the article itself, the ending arrangement is not a bad idea. The world of gods and monsters pays more attention to karma: the reason why Shen Dongfeng finally became the Emperor is clear, and I will not go into details here. What everyone is struggling with is why his sweetheart Shi Xiaonan stayed with Chongming forever. This is God's reward for Chongming's hundreds of years of infatuation with his wife. What's more, Xiaonan was originally the result of several reincarnations of Chongming's wife. He empathized with Xiaonan and was willing to die for it. It can be said that he made a choice between his wife's past life and this life. But he indulged in personal affairs, wasted the three realms, and eventually lost his position as a supreme being and his life. Therefore, looking at the final outcome using fate, we can still make some reasonable explanations. As the article says, this is all determined by fate. Here I would like to share my thoughts on a few points that are difficult to let go of. First, in terms of image portrayal, Shen Dongfeng, as the cultivator and responsible person of Emperor Zun, except for his skill, his ambition has not gradually improved with the development of the plot. From the beginning to the end, when he saw a beautiful woman, he would have straight eyes, confusion, nosebleeds, and extremely poor control over his sexual desire, to the point where he was almost indifferent to people and ghosts. It was okay to be called a "slut", but not enough to be an emperor. The first protagonist is the pillar of the whole text. If Shen Dongfeng does not break through himself, the entire theme will not be sublimated. Second, in terms of character creation, due to the large number of characters, and the special emphasis on the character traits of several female and male characters in war disputes and emotional entanglements, it feels like the verbal personalities of each other are just interchangeable in different situations, lacking the main axis and stability, and even contradictory. For example, Shen Dongfeng's words are heroic and worried about the world, but when he is really given the great responsibility of taking charge of the three realms, he expresses his desire to live in seclusion. In many crises and important moments, I relied on others to resolve me, but I was immersed in lust and couldn't extricate myself. Shi Xiaonan is her dream lover, but he is always intimate with several women around him. Many times, his longing for Xiaonan only appears when relevant events are triggered. The arrangement of the plot development is abrupt and lacks true feelings. Especially Shi Xiaonan's character, if she hadn't been replaced as the first protagonist in the extra chapter to express her heart, and her image became fuller and more deeply rooted in people's hearts, she would have been lost in the erotic world of Shen Dongfeng and the women around him. Xiaonan's character is full of contradictions just like Dongfeng's. It is necessary to highlight her chastity and devotion, but also uses her as a coat in the description. She is often naked for all kinds of people to see at a glance, and she often performs lewd acts that have nothing to do with the plot (although she is not controlled by her own soul, but the woman who controls her is not an unruly person), or she is arbitrarily possessed by wandering ghosts. She loves Dongfeng sincerely, but she has wild imaginations about the scene where Chongming hugged her naked when she was a hostage in the Yin Sect secret realm. When the servant boy talked to her about Chongming, her attitude was quite ambiguous. She wanted to kill Chongming, but asked him why he didn't resist in the middle, and even took the initiative to hug Chongming while he was sleepy. All this made people feel that she was a failure in character development. Speaking of Liuliu, her deceitful and vicious image is very full, but the description of her sudden awakening at the end of her life ruined this "golden body". Just imagine, Mingling has spent countless times with her life to save people who have not been influenced, but in the end, just a few words made her regret her life in a life-and-death duel. Isn't it strange. Third, in terms of structure, several plot points are poorly addressed or appear redundant. For example, the re-establishment of Emperor Zun was a scheme set up by Yu Huazi and others to guide Shen Dongfeng to gradually ascend to the throne. As the story progresses, the mystery gradually becomes clear, but what is the organization that Yu Huazi belongs to? Why does the last step require the assistance of the supreme earth goddess? Why is Xiaoya going to Dimu Temple? Who is the smoker? The father and daughter of Yinjun, who had a close friendship with Jindianlong, actually made great achievements in the subsequent events. Why were they only a flash in the pan? What is the nature of the wonderful relationship between Zhao Meiyu and her senior sister? Why didn't Chongming fight Luo Fan during the life-and-death showdown between Ming Ling and Tiantai? In addition, the appearance of Dipo and Meng Ruqing was too unexpected in the development of the entire plot. (The former broke out of the situation set up, and the latter added the poignancy of a short-lived romance. In fact, the story of the two may be more tortuous and sensational when attached to the existing characters.) The integration is not high, and it feels like a forced extraneous branch. Of course, the above doubts are not necessarily caused by focusing on one thing and neglecting the other. It may be the author's intentional blankness, just like Di Po said, "Some things are better not to be known." However, if the plot is too mysterious, as if the world is not open, it is unclear and makes readers unable to understand, it will not work. Fourth, the setting of character relationships and the rationality of character behavior need to be discussed and confirmed. Let's talk about the relationship configuration of the characters first. Luo Fan, who has profound skills, deepness, stability, and no love for his children, becomes his assistant, while Shen Dongfeng, who is emotionally confused, becomes the master of the three realms in charge of heaven, earth, and yin. How can readers be convinced? There is also the configuration of Shen Dongfeng's lover. It is a destiny to lose Shi Xiaonan, so it is most reasonable to use Qin Milan, who is emotionally dedicated and has Shi Xiaonan's body, as his wife. Firstly, they have shared joys and sorrows for a while, and they have a relationship foundation. Secondly, her appearance is not inferior to hers, and she is satisfied with the emperor's good voice and appearance. More importantly, she uses Xiaonan's body, which completely solves Shen Dongfeng's lovesickness. But the author unbelievably made Wang Yanan, the daughter of his enemy, whom she hated so much, and finally made him his wife, which is really surprising. No matter how bizarre a fantasy novel is, it must abide by basic logic. Such unconventionality will only have the opposite effect. Let's talk about the contradictions in the behavior of the characters. They are also souls. When Qiuqiu Ma and her lover attacked the living people, it was to no avail, but when Shi Xiaonan rescued Shen Dongfeng, he was knocked far away, and the power was so strong that it was laughable. Compared with other characters, Zhang Qiqi and Qin Milan can be regarded as two very successful characters. It is a distinctive image that can be admitted into the palace of orthodox literature. As online literature, it is his duty to please the public. This may require the work itself to lower its stature in some places and show a temperament that appeals to both refined and popular tastes. This does not mean that the author's writing style is not slack. But as a reader, I still hope that the masterpiece will be more perfect. Don't disturb those who are sinister Wonderfulness is his allure. Chaos is his one flaw.

Fengzi and Xiaonan went through countless hardships, shared weal and woe, and supported each other, but they couldn't withstand the latecomer Chongming's stalking and poaching, and finally made the male protagonist a cuckold! Although the emotional content of this article is full of negative energy, it also indirectly reflects from the book that the author's love in real life is too miserable, and I feel sorry for the author. In real life, there are indeed some marriages or relationships where people cannot resist the temptation to cheat, but they are only a small number and cannot become the mainstream of social marriage and love. In the future, I also hope that the author will adjust his mentality, be optimistic, and spread more positive energy to society.

Everyone is confused about the ending. It's just that Shen Dongfeng and Xiaonan are not together, but are there two people at the end of the article? In Fengzi's Liuliu Jueba chapter, Xiaonan sacrificed blood in the cave to save Fengzi's soul, but Fengzi died to save each other in vain. This swore that the two of them would die in the end. Undying love, Xiaonan's soul is gone, the main body is gone, Fengzi defeats and becomes the emperor, both of them leave behind physical bodies and remaining memories, and what Chongming is entangled with is a ray of residual soul that he pieced together with the fragments of Xiaonan and his wife's souls, and is dominated by Xiaonan's memory. Fengzi and Wang Yanan can't say that Fengzi should say Emperor Zun. Wang Yanan has done a lot of endings for Fengzi and it's okay to give Emperor Zun, but when it comes to Wang Yanan, he must bring Qin Milan with him. Wang Yanan's characteristic in the Wang family is that he is good at management. It was Fengzi who came to save Xiaonan. Afterwards, he paid a lot for Fengzi, but there were too many coincidences to save Fengzi. Fengzi put Fengzi to sleep, broke the formation and let Fengzi choose his lover. Fengzi cut off his relationship with Xiaonan. To help Fengzi save Xiaonan, he wanted to recruit a century-old soul. It was Qin Milan. Qin Milan had always had no problems. When he just came out of the blood mouth of Xiaonan Soul Sacrifice Cave, he said, "Go back there quickly. It's dangerous." Fengzi was also surprised by this. It shows that she knows a lot of things that have a certain relationship with Chongming. It seemed that the two of them had ulterior motives and they were just doing it well. Wang Yanan should have faked it for real. Qin Milan left silently in the end because he was probably feeling guilty. This ending is still okay. The article starts out well, but as it goes on, there are more and more doubts. Many of the storylines don't match, or exceed. The entire text is confused by Chong Ming's attitude and actions in the passage between resurrecting his wife and empathizing with Shi Xiaonan. The theme of the whole text is gone, and the Chongming chapter of the article wants to whitewash Chongming, highlight his crazy love for his wife, and transfer his crazy love to Shi Xiaonan, who he has watched grow up (I feel Chongming is disgusting here). For his wife, the two realms of yin and yang are wasted, but for Shi Xiaonan, his body is annihilated, and he controls the night. What Shi Xiaonan did was to save her. He didn't do anything to Shi Xiaonan because he wanted to say that Chongming was a gentleman. It can be seen that the theme was to write about Chongming's sinister infatuation and give up everything for love, regardless of the world, the identity of the superior, or even his life, even to the point of losing his soul. This is an alternative kind of love that people want to accept. Naihe Wenwen made Chong Mingshuo into a sinister, cunning, unscrupulous, and sentimental scumbag. He not only wanted to resurrect his wife but also used her, he loved Shi Xiaonan but saw Shi Xiaonan's soul was shattered, and finally put his wife and Shi Xiaonan together. Therefore, it is normal for readers who deviate from the theme and ideas to comment that the second half of the article is confusing and unfinished. Other articles give a character, and then it is clear how to write from hanging silk to the top winner. The theme and idea are simple and clear. I didn't know what to write until later in this article. It is obviously written in reverse order. I read the article from back to front, and used what I want to write at the end to connect the previous chapters. After adding doubts, objects, and disappearing forces to the plot, it was discovered that Dipo was very hostile to Chongming, and that Dipo was about to fall and give birth to the Mother of the Earth again. The theme of the entire article was set as the game between Dipo and Chongming. The article not only elaborated on Chongming's dark and alternative love, but also made every character in it come alive. , It can also connect the whole article together, and the doubtful points and the confusing and unfinished parts of the article are swept away. The article appears to be wonderful, with wonderful strokes everywhere, so the ending cannot be ended. The article is like half a good book, but in fact it is necessary to preface it. The full text Fengzi to Dizun did not give it glory. Everyone around him and Feng Zi's dialogues seem to know something, from the remnants of the madam's life to the fragments of Xiaonan's ending that have never been freed, Luo Fan's memory, the ghost stone mother, Pu Kong's body, why Chongming was trapped by Lin Xiao in the temple, and later the Empress Temple, there were many smoking men, all of which give a sense of prologue. As long as the preface allows Fengzi to be brilliant and Xiaonan to be free, avoid the ambiguity with Chongming, Fengzi and Xiaonan reunite, explore less and be more straightforward, and anyone can write a grand supernatural theme, then the author of the article will gain more quickly than writing several books. The author's writing ability is still very strong. The characters of Po Meng and Lin Xiao in the article can be said to be of palace level. Po Meng, Meng Ruqing, live up to Tathagata, live up to Qing, you can't bear to fulfill my love, I will save you a crisis with my life. Lin Xiao, if I have a goal, I will carry it out to the end. No matter you are the reincarnation of the Emperor or the Supreme Being, no matter what, you must remember that this is the madman Lin Xiao. This article actually reflects that in the real world, people are just as impatient, helpless, helpless, sleepless and haggard as they are in scams and conspiracies. I have read countless books for more than ten years. The heroine Xiao Nan in this book is one of the most miserable. I would like to express my thoughts. A wisp of remnant soul suffering from six lifetimes Encountering more suffering in this life The soul is scattered and freed from suffering The fragments of the remaining soul continue to suffer

The male protagonist is like a fool, impulsive and regardless of the consequences. Although it is human nature, I really can't stand this male protagonist.

I'm not with Shi Xiaonan, so I won't watch it.

I think if the length is increased by 2%-3% to explain the previous suspense, it may be more perfect. For example, the following points: 1. What is the nature of the organization that Fengzi's grandfather belongs to? 2. Why did the hunchback call Fengzi "Master"? 3. When Fengzi was still relatively weak, she was possessed by an old ghost from the Wang family and was trapped in the Octagonal Tower. However, it seemed that the old ghost particularly hated the Wang family. What's the inside story here? I remember that there was an old ghost named "Uncle Tao" next to the fourth master. What kind of ghost was he? 4. Why did Lin Xiao seal the Ghost King in the first place? 5. The Skeleton Army, the Four Charms and Eight Demons, the Giant Lizard, and the two Yin City armies seem to be doing nothing behind them. 6. Before he died, Mr. Wang said that Fengzi's grandfather's diary was written on animal skins... Why was there no explanation later? 7. Why is Luo Fan able to stay young? It is said that Duanmu, Lin Xiao's subordinate, did it, but why is there no official explanation? 8. Why did Susu's grandfather only ask the ages of those people on the bus before he knew the car? Something's going to happen soon? 9. I personally think that the punishment given to the second ancestor is unfair. It's okay for Panyang to die unjustly, but Bokong has always been kind-hearted, but he ended up with the same fate as Panyang. I think the punishment was inappropriate. Personally, I think Bokong should be allowed to restore his magic power and identity and assist Fengzi in taking charge of the three realms. 10. Why are Yinjun and his daughter, who have a good relationship with Jindianlong, not mentioned a word in the second half? The above is where I feel confused because I can't get the answer. This is purely a personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it.

Why do chapters always break? It's baffling to see! After reading one chapter, I suddenly couldn't pick up the rest! Software problem?

The ending is rubbish! The main reason why this book is so messy is because of the relationship between Fengzi and Xiaonan! I didn't expect this ending! ! ! The author is stupid, so I advise you not to read it!

Is the male protagonist a fool? He is cowardly and incompetent, and he always wants to go ahead and show off! What logic 😒

The writing was good at the beginning, but then I couldn't get up to it! The ink is getting more and more stained. How many times have I put a knife on the enemy's neck, and he was even run away... This is the most regretful book I have ever read.