Wuhun Luo Sanpao? I Am the Dragon Emperor Coming to This World!

Simple evaluation: average, average writing Detailed evaluation: This outline is not suitable for starting a harem. If you start a harem, you have to force the timeline later. Ah Yin is no longer with Tang Hao, but he can still have Tang San, and he can also have twin martial arts spirits; the writing is not good, there is no sense of picture, and it is difficult to read, and it is easy to get out of the drama; the definition of soul power improvement is too hasty, and it is about to break through as soon as it is broken. It is understandable that you are a cool writer, but it is uncomfortable to read. The protagonist's numerical value is too much, and the parts that should highlight the coolness are too general, and the protagonist has not been met. There are no difficulties, and the contrast cannot be highlighted, so most of the energy is written on the narrative flow plot; the excess of personal heroism is written into the protagonist's dozen or more or one-on-one leapfrog. I think that for the theme of Douluo Continent, in addition to the protagonist's own excellent strength in the time-travel element, another very important point is the group portrait of teamwork. Otherwise, why would there be different types and different types of martial arts settings? Many fan authors have not grasped this point; and this article There are many plots in the story that are full of contradictions, and many of the flaws are conflicts for the sake of conflict. The reasons are very nonsensical or should not be, such as the blind date of the Pope, the conflict between brothers, etc. Moreover, according to the original setting, Wuhun Temple is good in the early stage. In the beginning timeline, Wuhun Temple is an organization that does not care about one's origin, is friendly to civilians, and can get ahead as long as it has strength. It is popular, even in the later period of the original work, civilians are awakened in Wuhun Temple, and here it is simply to compete with Wuhun Temple. It's the same thing; after reading the catalog, I have no desire to read it. Generally speaking, the writing is not good, the plot is bland and the pace is too fast, and there is a lack of hot spot judgment.

All I can say is that it's really average. The protagonist broke through to a Titled Douluo at such a young age and didn't even know him personally. It was really weird. I had already guessed the plot behind it. The supporting characters were shocked and the protagonist was showing off.

The theme selection is indeed good, "Luo Sanpao counterattacks Jackie Chan Emperor" is originally an idea with a lot of room for development. But the outline is completely unsustainable, the main line is vague, and the rhythm cannot be brought out. The character design is even more unpleasant. The character's behavior lacks reasonable motivations, he is reckless and has no brains, and the character setting is flawed. It completely deviates from the core characteristics of the original character. It feels like the author is writing based on subjective assumptions, and it is very OOC. It can be seen that the author's understanding of Douluo's worldview is relatively shallow. There are many loopholes in the basic settings such as the soul ring age and the soul skill system. The original character's personality setting is off track, and it is easy to make dramas when reading. The most fatal thing is that the exciting points are not fully captured - the highlight moments that should be laid out are passed by in one stroke, and the excitement is half gone. This does not mean that it is easy to write about unimportant daily life. The main reason is that the writing style is a bit poor and the distribution of pen and ink is unbalanced. From the beginning to the end, it becomes more and more dull and tasteless, and this good idea is wasted.

The harem will start later, I can't stand it anymore

Many parts of the protagonist's story were hurriedly covered. I don't know why the harem and the birth of children were hurriedly mentioned later. I feel like I could describe the main character a little more. The plot also went downhill.

It's okay. Although it can't be said to be a masterpiece, it can be regarded as an above-average level among Seven Cats. There are generally no problems with the writing and logic, and there are no very specific poisonous points. It is just that occasionally some cups are not very smooth and a bit forced. Overall good

Among all the fan authors, he is considered poor at keeping a running account of the entire process. If you just keep a running account, forget it, but if you encounter a thirty-thousand-year-old soul bone earlier, you will accept it, and later you will start to "think about it" when you encounter a hundred-thousand-year-old spirit bone. Did you forget the first part of the ai after writing it?

It was okay before starting a harem, but after starting a harem, especially after the protagonist has a child, the main character is not focused on the protagonist. The early stage is a cool novel, attracting those who like to read cool fighting novels. The middle stage of raising children is not the same group of readers as the early stage. Moreover, this is a fanfic. You can adopt girls but you can't start raising children directly. The protagonist has already retired before he becomes a god. I think it is better to finish it with 300,000 words. 😑

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