Immortal Tomb

The author's thinking is very bold, full of ideas, and innovative. However, the division of Tianshu's abilities is not reasonable enough, the characters are not vivid and specific enough, and there are too many female characters. I suspect that the author has such tendencies. The description of the fighting scenes is not vivid enough, the cultivation process is briefly described, and the description of the process of breaking Feng Shui is too simple. It should be due to the author's insufficient knowledge and writing skills. Overall, keep up the good work.

After Chapter 1000, I really can't stand it anymore, pretending to be a holy mother, but not pretending to be anything like it. Those who can persist to 1,000 chapters are basically short of books. The storyline seems to be wild and unconstrained, but in fact it has no logic. It seems that in a very big game, the plot has been exhausted halfway through. It is nothing more than a change of names. It is nothing more than that the world is very big. Once you reach the top, you will find it is small. Then you will reach the top again and you will find it again. The cycle continues. The whole picture can be seen at a glance. Finally, I complained about the protagonist, trying to pretend to be a virgin but not being able to do so.

I think it would be better for him to keep some spiritual pets. I just love books like that. Hahaha, it's just that his detailed description is a bit too much. The protagonist didn't deliberately cultivate, so he was a bit awkward. Things are moving a little slowly. . . . . .

The layout is large and the plot is quite engaging. Although there are some shadows of other online novels, it has also developed its own structure. The only shortcoming is that there are many "snapshots" (which means taking things out of context, don't blame it), which makes it difficult for people to guard against. The main "bringing through" plot is about to end something, but when you turn the next page, it ends immediately. Or maybe I was too absorbed in watching it and didn't keep up with the rhythm. But overall, not bad.

The author has gone to write a new book, and this book may require eunuchs

Writing a book is the best indicator of a person's level. Generally, the author of a book with more than 800 chapters can't continue talking nonsense! Besides, only people who have nothing to do will waste their time on books with more than 1,000 chapters!

In the early stage, it felt quite invincible. What I want to say the most is that the strength of the Xuanwu Army has shrunk too much. Two immortals with seal cultivation level can destroy Xuanwu Pass. But you told me that the two ancestors of the Guo position a thousand years ago could not destroy Xuanwu Pass. How much has it shrunk? Okay, okay, okay, Xuanzhou is the place where the protagonist was born after all. How can you make your combat power stronger? Although the details are not handled well, the tomb robbery was still very professional. I guess the author also put in the effort.

I just want to ask about how low your strength is. What do you think about committing suicide everywhere? You have to ask others to save you every time. Aren't you already getting a box lunch with your pig's feet? Isn't it nice to be wretched and developed? It's so annoying to see a pig's feet seeking death.

More too slow

Alas, all these benefits have been taken by Na Qingyu. She doesn't feel bad about it. The same goes for the protagonist. Is she a harem or a heroine?