Necropolis Immortal

The author's thinking is bold and imaginative, taking a unique approach. However, the categorization of the Heavenly Book's abilities is not reasonable enough, the character portrayals are not vivid or detailed enough, and there are too many female characters, raising suspicions of the author's... Well, you know.

I couldn't stand it after chapter 1000. The protagonist tries too hard to be a saint, and doesn't even do it convincingly. Anyone who makes it to chapter 1000 is probably just looking for something to read. The plot seems fantastical, but it's completely illogical. It appears to be a grand scheme, but the plot falters halfway through.

I think it would be better if he kept some spirit pets. I just like those kinds of books. Haha, it's just that there's a bit too much detailed description. The protagonist doesn't seem to be deliberately cultivating, which feels a bit awkward. The plot develops a bit slowly...

The plot is grand in scope and quite engaging. While it borrows elements from other online novels, it has carved out its own unique structure. The only drawback is the frequent use of veiled references (this might be considered taking things out of context, please forgive me), which makes it difficult to anticipate events.

The author has gone to write a new book; this one might have to be abandoned.

Writing a book best reveals a person's skill level; generally, authors can't keep up the hype after 800 chapters! Besides, only people with nothing better to do would waste their time on a book with over 1000 chapters!

Initially, the character seemed quite invincible. What I really want to say is that the Xuanwu Army's strength has been severely weakened. Two Immortals with sealed cultivation could destroy Xuanwu Pass, but you're telling me that two ancestors who reached the highest level a thousand years ago couldn't even break through it? How much has it been reduced to? This is ridiculous!

I just want to ask, with such low skill levels, what are you thinking, constantly courting death? You always need others to save you; if you weren't the main character, you'd be dead by now. Isn't it better to play it safe and develop your character cautiously? Seeing a main character who courts death is just so annoying.

The updates are too slow.

Sigh, Qingyu gets all the benefits without batting an eye. And this protagonist... Is it a harem or just a female lead?