Douluo Dalu: My Martial Soul Is a Blade, and Every Strike Is a Critical Hit

All I can say is that the protagonist's reserve team members are rubbish. They are still in their 30s at the age of 20. Later, they are said to have been specially trained for several years, and then take medicinal baths. In their 20s, they are still taking medicated baths and special training. After being in their 30s, another one of more than 40s appears inexplicably. I just want to say to the author, when you draw the cow's head well, you must also draw the body of the cow well! Also, the 100,000-year-old soul bone only adds one level of soul master and one skill to the protagonist. Earlier, the system said that the things given by the person who beat him alive were not good, and then a 100,000-year-old soul bone was revealed. Isn't this just a slap in the face? There are a lot of good reviews, but not many people spoke. I can only say that there are a lot of trolls.

It feels good, but I feel that the ending is too hasty. I hope it will be written about Ning Xiao traveling to the world of Dou Po Cang Qiong and becoming Xiao Yan's companion. Finally, he and Xiao Yan break through the Dou Emperor to open their source energy and then go to a higher level world to explore. It can be regarded as the follow-up to Dou Po (doge

A good beginning, but the more you write, the more outrageous it gets. You can use the protagonist of the original work as an automatic treasure house. If you want to kill decisively, just kill them directly. I offend them one by one. I want to get back together, but they offend again. I don't know what to write.

Disgusting, if you don't do Tang San, as a time traveler, how can you not do Tang San?

After eating the two-bead fairy grass at level 17, you told me that you were downgraded. Tang San has always practiced internal energy. How could you still survive after eating two bead fairy grass? He dared to give a shameless explanation that the protagonist would be downgraded even if he didn't improve his soul power. You really have no respect for the original work at all. What is grass jelly? The existence of bugs in Douluo Continent is the same as eating two cabbages. Really speechless

The main character is useless and rubbish. This is the worst fan fiction I have ever read.

Nice! ! !

I think there are no problems with the plot in the early and middle stages, but in the later stage, the setting of the god position is very outrageous. Everyone has ascended, but he has no author. Should I give an explanation? Also, you already prepared the ending but you didn't let them reunite, but you traveled to the next world. Is this reasonable? Overall, this book is okay, but I won't read it again.

I can only say it's a mess, okay?

Not decisive in killing, don't use it if you have the background, insist on creating an ambiguous harem, the content does not match the introduction, the donkey's head is wrong and the horse's mouth is wrong, and it is misleading.